Question

【題目】假定你是李華，是一名高二學(xué)生。最近，你校廣播站向全體學(xué)生招募兩名英語播音員。你很想嘗試一下，請根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)寫一封自薦信。

1.自我介紹和寫信的目的；

2.自身優(yōu)勢；

3.希望被錄取。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭語已為你寫好。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua, a student in Class 1, Grade 2. I have read the notice

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Yours,

Li hua

Answer 1

【答案】I am Li Hua, a student in Class 1, Grade 2. I have read the notice that our school radio needs two English announcers, therefore, I am writing to volunteer to serve as one.

First of all, I am greatly interested in broadcasting. I have received some professional training in my spare time, hoping that I can work as an announcer in the future. Now I would like to put what I have learned into practice and gain some experience. Besides; I am good at English, especially spoken English. I won first prize in the English Speech Contest last year. So I think I am highly qualified for the job. If I were admitted, I would spare no effort to serve the students.

I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance to work for the school radio station. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文屬于提綱類作文，要求寫一封自薦信。要注意書信的格式和特殊用詞�？紤]用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。要點(diǎn)：1.自我介紹和寫信的目的；2.自身優(yōu)勢；3.希望被錄取。這篇文章對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語，為文章增色不少，如: First of all首先，be good at擅長……還使用了同位語從句I have read the notice that our school radio needs two English announcers, therefore, I am writing to volunteer to serve as one.和賓語從句So I think I am highly qualified for the job.等多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，增加了文章的可讀性。