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16．據(jù)報(bào)道，南昌火車站廣場(chǎng)上的12棵樹(shù)木以及所有的綠化全部被柵欄封死，原本可供乘客坐下來(lái)休息的"石凳"也被"圈"了起來(lái)．此事引發(fā)1友的熱議．但是，相關(guān)部門卻說(shuō)，"除了破壞綠化帶之外，還有些旅客躺在上面睡覺(jué)，嚴(yán)重影響南昌火車站作為省會(huì)城市窗口的形象．"請(qǐng)結(jié)合此事，并根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文．

簡(jiǎn)要描述事情的經(jīng)過(guò)	廣場(chǎng)上的12棵樹(shù)木以及所有的綠化全部被柵欄封死
分析發(fā)生的原因	一些旅客把樹(shù)壇當(dāng)成凳子來(lái)休息，他們還把垃圾丟在樹(shù)木旁邊； 甚至還破壞樹(shù)木，給管理工作帶來(lái)了許多麻煩．
你的看法	（請(qǐng)考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷或感想，提出至少一種做法）

注意：1．對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯；
2．詞數(shù)100左右．
參考詞匯：樹(shù)壇 tree altar　凳子 stool．
It is reported that twelve trees on the square of Nanchang station have been forbidden from accessing．This makes people concerned．Some officials say passengers damage the greens．Besides，some passengers use tree altars as stools to rest throwing rubbish around．To make them worried，some even damage trees，which has brought much trouble and affected the image of the city as well．
However，I dont agree with that．Its true that it is their duties to protect the environment and green facilities．Everyone should form the habit．However，if passengers have comfortable wooden stools，they wont choose the stone ones．After all，they feel helpless in that condition．So more attention should be given to make their life better and more convenient．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
To make them worried，some even damage trees，which has brought much trouble and affected the image of the city as well．
讓他們擔(dān)心的是，有的甚至破壞了樹(shù)木，帶來(lái)了許多麻煩以及影響城市形象．
高分句型二：
However，if passengers have comfortable wooden stools，they wont choose the stone ones．
然而，如果乘客有舒適的凳子，他們不會(huì)選擇石頭的．

解答 It is reported that twelve trees on the square of Nanchang station have been forbidden from accessing．This makes people concerned．Some officials say passengers damage the greens．Besides，some passengers use tree altars as stools to rest throwing rubbish around．To make them worried，some even damage trees，which has brought much trouble and affected the image of the city as well（高分句型一）．
However，I dont agree with that．Its true that it is their duties to protect the environment and green facilities．Everyone should form the habit．However，if passengers have comfortable wooden stools，they wont choose the stone ones（高分句型二）．After all，they feel helpless in that condition．So more attention should be given to make their life better and more convenient．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開(kāi)放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．