Question

一年一度的校園文化節(jié)又拉開了序幕，但今年學(xué)生卻沒有表現(xiàn)出像往年的興趣和熱情。面對這一現(xiàn)象，有人提出校園文化節(jié)還要不要舉辦的問題，這引起了同學(xué)們的討論。上周末你班也進(jìn)行了一場討論。請你根據(jù)下面表格所提供的內(nèi)容將討論結(jié)果做一總結(jié)并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，字?jǐn)?shù)120左右。

	觀點(diǎn)
支持	給學(xué)生創(chuàng)造了展示自我才華的舞臺(tái)；有利于提高學(xué)習(xí)興趣； 豐富校園文化，活躍校園氣氛。
反對	學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)重，抽不出時(shí)間； 許多活動(dòng)和學(xué)習(xí)無關(guān)，沒有多大意義。
你的看法	……

注意：1. 行文連貫，內(nèi)容完整；2. 題目和開頭語已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 3. 總詞數(shù)120左右。

To be continued or not?

The annual campus cultural festival has drawn back its curtain again.____________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Some students believe that campus cultural festival can offer a wonderful stage for students to show their talents. Apart from helping students promote their interest in study, a serious of activities also enrich the campus culture and make campus atmosphere more active. However, some students hold different views. They emphasize that they have been kept busy with their study and have no time to spare for the activities of the campus cultural festival. They also state that they cannot benefit much from some activities, which, in their opinion, have little to do with their study.

From my opinion of view, holding the campus cultural festival is a must. On the one hand, more students will be motivated to develop their potential abilities which will make them qualified for their future positions. On the other hand, students will find it a good chance to relax themselves as well as gain much knowledge that can’t be found in the book.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)表格提示，將“校園文化節(jié)還要不要舉辦”這一話題的討論結(jié)果總結(jié)一下，并給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。作文可以分為三部分，支持者的觀點(diǎn)；反對者的觀點(diǎn)；自己的看法。寫作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)的正確使用。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文使用了較多的賓語從句，如believe that..., emphasize that..., state that...等；

范文使用了較多的短語，如offer... for sb, Apart from, a serious of, been kept busy with, benefit from, From my opinion of view, find it a good chance to relax, as well as等，使作文變得充實(shí)；

范文注意使用Apart from, However, On the one hand, On the other hand等來銜接句子與段落，使作文銜接緊密；

范文還使用了定語從句which, in their opinion, have little to do with their study和which will make them qualified for their future positions及that can’t be found in the book，使作文句式多樣，靈活運(yùn)用語法知識的能力較強(qiáng)。

范文中的must意為“必不可少的事”。

考點(diǎn)：材料類作文