Question

15．Jack，a clerk at the local bank，was wandering alone on the street．It was a cold，silent winter night．His mind was on his wife Linda，who had been in a car accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed，waiting for more money for her operation．Jack had sold everything he had，and he had tried his best to borrow money from all the people and banks he could．But the real world is cruel．A large amount of money was still needed．To Jack，it would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help．"I have only one option left，"Jack said to himself．Then he went to the bank，his workplace，again．For several days，he observed the bank and planned a theft．
The next day，he went to work as usual．Everything seemed normal：he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always did．But no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work，instead of the small one he always carried．At 5：00 pm，the bank closed，and the clerks and the guardshad all gone home．However，at that moment，Jack was in the bathroom，and the guards didn't notice him，of course．When the noises coming from the street were replaced by silence and everything turned dark，Jack came out from the bathroom．He first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his new suitcase．He was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system for the past 30 days．Using a special key and some other tools，he then easily opened the doors of the safes．The bank's security system wasn't very good，which allowed Jack to take a lot of money．Several minutes later，Jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with money．
注意：
1．所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2．應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；
3．續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；
4．續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)．
Paragraph 1：
After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while，the alarms began to ring．
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Paragraph 2：
But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank，an old man．
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Answer 1

分析 本題特點(diǎn)是"讀寫結(jié)合"，考查考生閱讀理解、要點(diǎn)概括、用英語(yǔ)敘事說(shuō)理等多方面能力．解答此類試題，除了要注意一般寫作規(guī)范之外，還要準(zhǔn)確理解所給文章的中心思想并準(zhǔn)確予以解讀和概括．
（高分句型一）The police arrived at thebankvery quickly，only to find no one there．句意為：警察很快到達(dá)了，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)沒有人在場(chǎng)．該句型使用了only to do表示意料之外的結(jié)果；
（高分句型二）The next day was a really special day for the town，which was filled with newspaper and TV reporters covering the strange theft．
句意為：第二天，對(duì)于小鎮(zhèn)來(lái)說(shuō)是特別的，到處都是新聞報(bào)道這起奇怪的盜竊．which引導(dǎo)一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which指這件事情；
高級(jí)詞匯：
only to find 結(jié)果，；be filled with充滿；guilty內(nèi)疚的；deepen加深；
as soon as possible盡快；even though 即使；

解答 After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while，the alarms began to ring．（高分句型一）The police arrived at thebankvery quickly，only to find no one there．
（高分句型二）The next day was a really special day for the town，which was filled with newspaper and TV reporters covering the strange theft．The clerksat the bank were busy discussing the case，of course，including Jack．The police could only promise to catch the thieves as soon as possible，even though no clues had been found yet．
      （這段描寫了Jack內(nèi)心的煎熬）But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank，an old man．He seemed to be the only person to blame and was removed from his position．At last，with enough money for her operation，Jack's wife was saved．However，Jack felt guilty about the manager of the bank．He could not forget what he had done to the old man．His guilt deepened as time went by．Finally，he turned himself in to the police and accepted his punishment．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇續(xù)寫故事的作文．續(xù)寫故事一定要和原文在內(nèi)容和時(shí)態(tài)上連貫一致，所以熟讀原文很重要．其他方面和一般的寫作時(shí)一樣的要求，詞語(yǔ)運(yùn)用正確是最主要的要求，也是閱卷老師給分的重點(diǎn)．