Question

請你根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

Failure comes from lack of efforts rather than lack of ability.

注意：

①無須寫標(biāo)題；

②除詩歌外，文體不限；

③文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

④詞數(shù)為120左右，如引用提示語則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

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Answer 1

Years of school life has taught me a lot of things. What impressed me most is that failure comes from lack of efforts rather than lack of ability.

When it comes to that, memories flood into my mind. I can still well remember it was a time when I was in senior 1. Every one of my class said I was smart and clever, and I fancied myself too. But to my great disappointment, I failed in a very important test. Seeing through my puzzle, my head teacher said to me,” failure comes from lack of efforts rather than lack of ability.” It was his words that woke me up. So I spared no efforts to study and made great progress in the end.

From my own experience, I can draw a conclusion that we fail because we don’t try our best rather than we are not intelligent. Only when we have a good knowledge of it can we succeed in our life.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)所給提示“Failure comes from lack of efforts rather than lack of ability.”寫一篇短文。所給提示的意思是“失敗源于不努力而不是缺乏能力”。所給材料強(qiáng)調(diào)自身努力的重要性，可以圍繞這個(gè)主題進(jìn)行作文。使用第一人稱進(jìn)行作文。注意作文的條理性，不要出現(xiàn)拼寫和表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤；多使用定語從句、非謂語動(dòng)詞、名詞性從句、固定句型等語法知識。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文以自己的親身經(jīng)歷為例子，比較真實(shí)。當(dāng)然，也可以虛構(gòu)一個(gè)例子來印證材料。

范文使用了一些重要的語法知識：主語從句What impressed me most；表語從句that failure comes from lack of efforts rather than lack of ability；定語從句when I was in senior 1；賓語從句I was smart and clever；非謂語動(dòng)詞Seeing through my puzzle；強(qiáng)調(diào)句型It was his words that woke me up.；同位語從句that we fail because we don’t try our best rather than we are not intelligent；倒裝句Only when we have a good knowledge of it can we succeed in our life.等，作文句式多樣，使作文看起來層次分明，說服力強(qiáng)；

范文還使用了一些固定短語：rather than；lack of；When it comes to；to my great disappointment；spared no efforts to；made great progress；in the end；draw a conclusion等，使作文內(nèi)容變得充實(shí)。

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