Question

高考在即，你發(fā)現(xiàn)班級(jí)中有的同學(xué)的壓力很大，平時(shí)不眠不休拼命做題。請(qǐng)?jiān)谛Ｓ⒄Z(yǔ)報(bào)上，就此現(xiàn)象，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，寫一篇100-120個(gè)詞的短文，向大家宣傳正確的應(yīng)試態(tài)度和做法。（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)）
We Should Lesson the Test Anxiety
As the College Entrance Examination draws near, quite a few of my classmates suffer much pressure._____________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

We Should Lesson the Test Anxiety
As the College Entrance Examination draws near, quite a few of my classmates suffer much pressure. Some of them bury themselves in endless homework day and night against the clock, which robs them of happiness and does them harm physically and mentally.
Although pressure, to some extent, can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative affect. Pressure can destroy a student’s confidence. More seriously it might make some students lose control of their emotions and behaviors.
Considering the great damage of overdue pressure, we should learn how to relieve pressure. First, we should have a right evaluation of ourselves, so it’s to make use of advantages and avoid disadvantages. Second, we’d better squeeze out some time for fun such as listening to music. Sometimes even crying is an effcient way to release stress. Finally, if you find pressure is nearly beyond your control, you’d better turn to professional psychological guidance. （建議有點(diǎn)多，供大家選擇）

試題分析：這是一篇開放式作文，主題是有的同學(xué)的壓力很大，平時(shí)不眠不休拼命做題，要求寫出自己的經(jīng)歷，文章基本上沒有要點(diǎn)，要求考生用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求觀點(diǎn)明確，駕馭語(yǔ)言的能力強(qiáng)，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：開放式作文難就難在沒有要點(diǎn)，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地大，但也增加了難度，有的考生會(huì)覺得無話可說，這時(shí)可以充分利用所給的首句，展開陳述，但要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，句式選擇要富有變化。