Question

近期，你校學生會以“高中生該不該參加秋游”為題，在你校展開了調查。請你根據下表的信息，以“Should Senior Students Go Autumn Outing”為題，寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文，描述此次調查結果并發(fā)表你的觀點。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

In the past few days , the Students’ Union has carried out a survey with the title of “Should Senior Students Go Autumn Outing “. Here is the result .

60% of the students hold the opinion that students should go autumn outing .For one thing , it is a good chance for students to get close to nature where they can breathe in fresh air, which is definitely good for health .For another, students are those who carry a lot of pressure because of so much school work .Going autumn outing can be treated as a time for students to relax themselves , as a result , they are able to study in a better way .

However , the rest say no to going autumn outing .Firstly , they don’t think students have mood for enjoying the activity because of heavy school work .Secondly , going autumn outing will take up a lot of time , which students could spend on study .

Personally speaking , students will benefit a lot from going autumn outing .First of all , school is not the only place where students can learn .As we all know , they can learn more by dealing with each other and joining in activities .Next , students are having a stressful life every day , so they need some time to relax and have fun , or they will find it hard to keep going .

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求以“Should Senior Students Go Autumn Outing”為題，寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文，描述該項調查結果并發(fā)表自己的觀點。成文時應該：1. 首先介紹寫作背景，即展開調查的情況；2.正文部分介紹調查的結果，并且介紹支持方和反對方各自的理由；3.發(fā)表自己的看法和觀點。4.寫作時為了語言的連貫應該恰當使用連接詞和插入語；5.注意高級詞匯和句式的使用。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達結構清晰，段落分明。文中使用了表示層次的連接詞For one thing , For another，first of all , Next , Firstly , Secondly等；表示因果關系的 as a result ,表示總結的personally speaking , 表示轉折關系的however等，這些連詞的使用使文章內容連貫性強。而且定語從句which students could spend on study .并列句so they need some time to relax and have fun , or they will find it hard to keep going .等的使用也是文章的一個亮點。

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