Question

某海外學(xué)校舉辦英語夏令營,開設(shè)了如下課程：園藝(gardening)烹飪(cooking) 防身術(shù)(self-defence)護(hù)理(nursing）。
［寫作內(nèi)容］
假如你是王華，寫一封申請信，報(bào)名參加其中一門課程的學(xué)習(xí)。主要內(nèi)容包括：
（1）你感興趣的課程；
（2）你期望從這門課程中學(xué)到什么；
（3）為什么想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容。
注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 100字左右
2. 可適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)， 使內(nèi)容連貫。
3開始和結(jié)尾已給， 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear leader，
 I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses, such as gardening，cooking，self-defence, nursing and so on.
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
Looking forward to your early reply.
                                                      Yours truly
                                                        Wang Hua

Answer 1

Dear leader，
I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses, such as gardening， cooking， self-defence, nursing and so on.
I’d like to register to attend a course about gardening because I have liked flowers and grasses since I was a child. I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy
the beauty of nature.
For one thing，I hope to gain more knowledge of gardening ，which can help me to major in the gardening after attending college. Besides, I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure plants more, and also , I wish to get more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter university. For another, after graduation from college，I will devote my life to cultivating flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state ,which will attract more foreigners to visit .
Looking forward to your early reply.
                                   Yours，
                                    Wang hua

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