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3．在英語(yǔ)課堂上，你喜歡你的老師授課時(shí)只用英語(yǔ)，還是英語(yǔ)，漢語(yǔ)兼用？某英語(yǔ)雜志社就此話題邀請(qǐng)中學(xué)生發(fā)表看法． 請(qǐng)你圍繞該話題，參考所給要點(diǎn)，選擇一種授課形式，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文．
1．授課形式一：只用英語(yǔ)
優(yōu)點(diǎn)：有助于提高聽說(shuō)能力等
缺點(diǎn)：不易聽懂等
結(jié)論：…
2．授課形式2：英語(yǔ)、漢語(yǔ)兼用
優(yōu)點(diǎn)：易于理解等
缺點(diǎn)：英語(yǔ)氛圍不濃等
結(jié)論：…
注意：100詞左右．
參考詞匯：atmosphere 氛圍．
How do you prefer English classes to be taught，in English only，or in both English and Chinese？
I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only．As we know，a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well．（高分句型一）Classes taught in English provide students with such an environment．When Englishis the only language used in the classroom，students will have more opportunities to practice listening and speaking．Therefore，they will be able to learn more quickly．
However，there are also some problems with this teaching method．As we haven't mastered enough English words，sometimes we may find it difficult to follow the teacher．（高分句型二）Slow learners may even lose interest in English．
Practice makes perfect．To learn English well requires a lot of practice．Therefore，Ilike my English classes to be taught completely in English．
Or：
How do you prefer English classes to be taught？in English only，or in both English and Chinese？
I prefer my English classes to be taught in both Chinese and English．In my opinion，learning English is a step-by-step process．As middle school students，we only have a small vocabulary．If the teacher can use some Chinesein an English class，we will underst and the lesson better． （高分句型三）
Of course，an English class taught in two languages has its shortcomings．Such a class cannot create a good atmosphere for English learning．Some students will speak Chinese all the time and cannot learn English well．
If you want to learn a lesson well，you have to understand it first．To help students understand the lesson better，the teacher should use Chinese from time to time．（高分句型四）Therefore，Ilike my teacher to use both English and Chinese in teaching．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息在英語(yǔ)課堂上，你喜歡你的老師授課時(shí)只用英語(yǔ)，還是英語(yǔ)，漢語(yǔ)兼用？某英語(yǔ)雜志社就此話題邀請(qǐng)中學(xué)生發(fā)表看法． 請(qǐng)你圍繞該話題，參考所給要點(diǎn)，選擇一種授課形式，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文．，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：授課形式一：只用英語(yǔ)       優(yōu)點(diǎn)：有助于提高聽說(shuō)能力等          缺點(diǎn)：不易聽懂等
結(jié)論：…
授課形式2：英語(yǔ)、漢語(yǔ)兼用
優(yōu)點(diǎn)：易于理解等              缺點(diǎn)：英語(yǔ)氛圍不濃等
結(jié)論：…
2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：As we know眾所周知；Therefore因此；However然而；Practice makes perfect熟能生巧；In my opinion以我的觀點(diǎn)來(lái)看；from time to time不時(shí)地；
As we know，a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well．（高分句型一）
As we haven't mastered enough English words，sometimes we may find it difficult to follow the teacher．（高分句型二）
If the teacher can use some Chinese in an English class，we will understand the lesson better．（高分句型三）
To help students understand the lesson better，the teacher should use Chinese from time to time．（高分句型四）

解答 How do you prefer English classes to be taught，in English only，or in both English and Chinese？
       I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only．As we know，a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well．（高分句型一）Classes taught in English provide students with such an environment．When English is the only language used in the classroom，students will have more opportunities to practice listening and speaking．Therefore，they will be able to learn more quickly．
      However，there are also some problems with this teaching method．As we haven't mastered enough English words，sometimes we may find it difficult to follow the teacher．（高分句型二）Slow learners may even lose interest in English．
      Practice makes perfect．To learn English well requires a lot of practice．Therefore，I like my English classes to be taught completely in English．
Or：
      How do you prefer English classes to be taught？in English only，or in both English and Chinese？
      I prefer my English classes to be taught in both Chinese and English．In my opinion，learning English is a step-by-step process．As middle school students，we only have a small vocabulary．If the teacher can use some Chinese in an English class，we will understand the lesson better．（高分句型三）
      Of course，an English class taught in two languages has its shortcomings．Such a class cannot create a good atmosphere for English learning．Some students will speak Chinese all the time and cannot learn English well．
      If you want to learn a lesson well，you have to understand it first．To help students understand the lesson better，the teacher should use Chinese from time to time．（高分句型四）Therefore，I like my teacher to use both English and Chinese in teaching．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．