15．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除和修改．　　
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．　　
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．　　
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．　　
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
　　　　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Today I visited the Smiths--my first time visit to a American family．They live in a small town．It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home．The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home．They offered me coffee and another drinks．We have a good time talking and laughing together．They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question．In fact，they are planning to visit China in next year．

分析 作者在本文中講述了自己拜訪一個美國家庭--史密斯一家的經(jīng)歷．

解答 Today I visited the Smiths--my first time visit to a American family．They live in a small town．It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home．The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home．They offered me coffee and another drinks．We have a good time talking and laughing together．They∧eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question．In fact，they are planning to visit China in next year．
詳解：
1．去掉time；考查句子成分，漢語說第一次訪問，英語說my first visit便可．這一題是考查英漢語不同的表達習慣．如果一定要用time則可說my first time ro visit an American family 這時visit成了動詞，visit之后就不能用to了．
2．a(chǎn)改成an；考查冠詞，考查冠詞用法，American是元音開頭的單詞，前面的不定冠詞要用an．
3．for改為of；考查介詞，考查介詞的搭配be kind of sb to do sth．把文中的for改為of．
4．drove改為drive；考查并列成分，連接詞and連接的是兩個并列的動作：meet與drive．需把drove改為drive．
5．his改為their；考查代詞的數(shù)．The Smiths用的復數(shù)（指一家人或夫婦倆），后面的代詞應(yīng)用復數(shù)形式their．
6．a(chǎn)nother改為other；考查近義詞辨析，another作形容詞時可修飾復數(shù)名詞，這時它后面大都跟有few或基數(shù)詞．other作形容詞時，表"別的，其它的"，結(jié)合短文內(nèi)容此處要用other．
7．have改為had；考查動詞時態(tài)的使用．整篇文章記敘過去發(fā)生的事，基本時態(tài)用的是過去時，故have要改為had．
8．eager前面加were；考查形容詞；eager是形容詞，不能單獨作謂語，在前邊應(yīng)添加be的過去式were，在句中作謂語．
9．question改為questions；考查名詞復數(shù)的使用，lost of后面跟名詞的復數(shù)形式，故用questions．
10．去掉in；考查介詞，表示時間的名詞與next，this，last，one等詞連用時，前面不能再加介詞．

點評 通過快速閱讀短文了解短文的基本大意，再分析句子間的結(jié)構(gòu)關(guān)系，從詞義，詞性，固定短語，句式結(jié)構(gòu)等方面去找文中存在的錯誤加以修改．

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