Question

17．假設(shè)你是英國(guó)倫敦的Allan，前幾天你參加了一家旅行社組織的哈爾濱三日游的活動(dòng)．下面是這家旅行社的廣告，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面廣告中箭頭所指內(nèi)容對(duì)其不實(shí)之處向消費(fèi)者協(xié)會(huì)寫一封投訴信．

注意：1．詞數(shù)100詞左右；信的格式和開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm writing to express my complaint about the service of Morning Star Travel Agency．
             ．
Yours faithfully，
Allan．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封投訴信．
寫作要點(diǎn)為：1，食物里有沙子；2，車子太破，沒有冷氣；3，冷的洗澡水；3，強(qiáng)制購(gòu)物；4，兩個(gè)景點(diǎn)沒有去看．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I'm writing to express my complaint about the service of Morning Star Travel Agency．
       A few days ago，I joined a three-day trip to Harbin with this travel agency．I found a big difference between their ads and action．
       As they say，they provide large air-conditioned bus，but we only rode in a shabby bus without any air-conditioning．Yes，they served us lunch，but the food tasted terrible，some even with sand．We didn't enjoy any kind of shower； we only bathed in cold water．As for sightseeing，the guides led us to several expensive souvenir shops，which wasted us much time．As a result，two scenery spots were left unseen in the end．
       We do hope something can be done to prevent such things happening again．
Yours sincerely，
Allan

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