Question

16．假如你是李華．下面的圖表和漫畫反映了世界上野生動(dòng)物種類的變化情況和原因，請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)圖表和漫畫的理解，用英語向報(bào)社寫一篇短文．
1．描述野生動(dòng)物種類的變化趨勢(shì)；
2．分析導(dǎo)致野生動(dòng)物種類變化的原因；
3．談?wù)勀銓?duì)保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的看法和建議．
談?wù)勀銓?duì)保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的看法和建議．

注意：
1．可參照?qǐng)D表中文字及下面文章開頭所給的提示，作必要的發(fā)揮想象．
2．詞數(shù)100左右．開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear editor，
I'm writing for the animals that are in danger of dying out．
As is clearly shown in the bar chart，the kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past decades．With about 30，000 kinds of animals reduced on average each year，there were only 1.5 million left till 2016．
There are several reasons accounting for this problem．First，the environment is polluted and their natural habitats are destroyed，making the animals in danger．Besides，illegal killing is also an important reason．Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for fashion and a big profit，which reduces the number of the animals．
In my opinion，a national public campaign should be launched to give animals a good living environment．In addition，the government should pass some firm laws to forbid abuse killing．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for fashion and a big profit，which reduces the number of the animals
人類正在努力尋找野生動(dòng)物為時(shí)尚和豐厚的利潤(rùn)，從而減少動(dòng)物的數(shù)量．
高分句型二：
In my opinion，a national public campaign should be launched to give animals a good living environment．In addition，the government should pass some firm laws to forbid abuse killing．
我認(rèn)為，應(yīng)該發(fā)起一場(chǎng)全國性的公眾運(yùn)動(dòng)，為動(dòng)物提供一個(gè)良好的生活環(huán)境，此外，政府還應(yīng)該通過一些嚴(yán)格的法律，禁止虐待動(dòng)物．

解答 I'm writing for the animals that are in danger of dying out．
    As is clearly shown in the bar chart，the kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past decades．With about 30，000 kinds of animals reduced on average each year，there were only 1.5 million left till 2016．
    There are several reasons accounting for this problem．First，the environment is polluted and their natural habitats are destroyed，making the animals in danger．Besides，illegal killing is also an important reason．Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for fashion and a big profit，which reduces the number of the animals（高分句型一）．
    In my opinion，a national public campaign should be launched to give animals a good living environment．In addition，the government should pass some firm laws to forbid abuse killing（高分句型二）．
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．