Question

5．假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Paul已經(jīng)學(xué)漢語(yǔ)六年，為了更好地學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)及了解中國(guó)文化，他來(lái)信希望你向他推薦一部中文名著或優(yōu)秀中文電影．請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封回信．具體要求如下：
1．寫(xiě)信目的．
2．推薦理由（語(yǔ)言及文化方面）．
3．希望對(duì)方也能向你推薦一部英文名著或優(yōu)秀英文電影．
注意：
1．字?jǐn)?shù)100左右．
2．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)．
參考詞匯：推薦：recommend，文學(xué)名著：literary masterpiece
Dear Tom，
How is everything going？I am writing to share with you one of my favorite movies，The Road Home（推薦的理由）．It's a wonderful movie which is not only beneficial to your language study，but also helpful to your better understanding about common Chinese people's life（整體說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的目的）．
The film is well worth seeing．For one thing，the language in this Chinese movie may contribute to your study of Chinese in listening and speaking．For another，the cultural elements in the scene will equip you with Chinese cultural background，and above all，broaden your mind．Hope you can enjoy it（具體論述推薦的理由）．
I'll appreciate it if you can also recommend an English literary masterpiece or a wonderful English movie to me．（希望對(duì)方推薦一部英文名著或優(yōu)秀英文電影）
I am looking forward to your reply．                 
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
It's a wonderful movie which（1）is not only beneficial to your language study，but also （2）helpful to your better understanding about common Chinese people's life．
（1）該句是以movie為先行詞which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句；
（2）not only…but also不但…而且…，常常連接并列的主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞根據(jù)就近一致的原則；not only放在句首，要倒裝．
句型二：
I'll appreciate it if…：如果…我將非常感激
appreciate表示"感謝，感激"，表示"喜好、厭惡"的動(dòng)詞后往往接形式賓語(yǔ)后再接從句．

解答 Dear Tom，
 How is everything going？I am writing toshare with you one of my favorite movies，The Road Home（推薦的理由）．It's a wonderful movie which is not only beneficial to your language study，but also helpful to your better understanding about common Chinese people's life【高分句型一】（整體說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的目的）．
The film is well worth seeing．For one thing，the language in this Chinese movie may contribute to your study ofChinese in listening and speaking．For another，the cultural elements in the scene will equip you with Chinese cultural background，and above all，broadenyour mind．Hope you can enjoy it（具體論述推薦的理由）．
I'll appreciate it if you can also recommend an English literary masterpiece or a wonderful English movie to me【高分句型二】．（希望對(duì)方推薦一部英文名著或優(yōu)秀英文電影）
I am looking forwardto your reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)作時(shí)首先審題要到位：審體裁、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)；審要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)題目的要求審要點(diǎn)．其次要考慮詞語(yǔ)和句型的選用，詞語(yǔ)和句型的選用要包含作者的感情色彩和增強(qiáng)表達(dá)的氣勢(shì)；再次，運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流暢．