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【題目】閱讀下面材料, 根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段, 使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

The first thing Eileen Korey noticed when she got into the car that Wednesday afternoon in early May was a small diamond ring in the tray(托盤)between the front seats. It hadn't been there before. Weeks earlier, she had taken the car in to have the airbag replaced. The car belonged to her daughter and son-in-law and she was helping them out. Now she was picking it up. That's when she saw the ring. Korey, 64, of Lake Oswego quickly contacted her daughter and son-in-law to ask if they were missing a diamond ring or if any of their friends had reported losing a ring. They both wrote back, saying they had no idea what she was talking about.

Korey took the ring to the service desk at the garage to ask if any women technicians might have left a ring in the car while they were working on it. The woman behind the counter said only men worked on the cars.

Korey asked if the desk clerk could get information from the guy who had replaced the airbag. Over a two-way radio(對(duì)講機(jī)), Helbt said he'd placed the ring in the tray when it dropped to the car's floor after he opened up the steering column to replace the airbag. He was not sure how it got there.

She knew a friend who was a jeweler and stopped by to have her look at the ring to see if it was real. Her friend said the diamond, set in a white gold hand, was worth$1, 200 and Korey could easily sell it for $500. But she wouldn't sell it. After making sure the ring didn’t belong to anyone in her family—or anyone at the auto shop Korey tracked down the first owner of the car using paperwork she found in the glove box. Her detective work led her to a dealership in Beaverton, and the car's first owners：Daniel and Ashleigh Hannah. The Hannahs had purchased the small ring when they got engaged and were saving money to buy a house.

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One Sunday afternoon, they were driving to an event in their car but had to stop at the bank and use the ATM machine.

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The couple searched the parking lot and the car forhours. Nothing.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1：

One Sunday afternoon, they were driving to an event in their car but had to stop at the bank and use the ATM machine. Ashleigh, showing her husband where to turn, gestured wildly with her left hand and felt the ring slip off. However, when searching the car carefully, they weren't able to find it. They figured it fell out of the open driver's side window.

Paragraph 2：

The couple searched the parking lot and the car for hours. Nothing. Later, back at home, the Hannah has searched through the car for hours. Nothing. Years later, Daniel bought his wife a much larger engagement ring. Finally, this month Korey made contact with Daniel Hannah. They met, and as a reward for returning the ring, she simply asked that Daniel send her a photo of the moment he surprised his wife with her lost engagement ring. On Mother's Day, Ashleigh's son gave her the ring. It didn't fit and was much smaller than her replacement ring, but none of that mattered.

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫。文章講述了Eileen Korey在車修理后發(fā)現(xiàn)里面有一枚戒指，但是問了她的女兒和女婿，以及修理店的員工，他們都說不是自己的。后來她問了車的第一個(gè)主人，才知道戒指是他們的。

續(xù)寫分為兩段。第一段的開頭是：一個(gè)周末的下午，他們開車去參加一個(gè)活動(dòng)，但當(dāng)時(shí)需要在路邊停下，去自動(dòng)提款機(jī)上取錢。所以可以接著寫：丈夫取好錢后，妻子Ashleigh Hannah揮手讓他過來開車，因?yàn)閯?dòng)作太大，戒指從手指上滑落。但當(dāng)時(shí)他們沒有發(fā)現(xiàn)。第二段的開頭是：夫妻兩在停車場和車上找了很久。所以可以接著寫：他們什么也沒有發(fā)現(xiàn)�；氐郊液螅�他們又在車上仔細(xì)地找了幾遍，結(jié)果是一樣的。后來，他們不得不重新買一個(gè)訂婚戒指。當(dāng)Korey聯(lián)系他們時(shí)，他們才知道原來戒指掉在車?yán)锪�。見面時(shí)，Korey把戒指還給了Daniel，Daniel十分感激。他回家把戒指拿給妻子，雖然這個(gè)戒指比后來買的那個(gè)小得多，但是在Ashleigh看來兩個(gè)都一樣的珍貴。

續(xù)寫時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，續(xù)寫的內(nèi)容要符合邏輯。