Question

【題目】假設你是李華。你的外國朋友來信詢問你的寒假生活和你對未來的憧憬。請寫一封信進行回復�；匦彭毎�括如下要點：

1. 歡天喜地過春節(jié)；

2. 認真復習，準備高考；

3. 你所向往的大學及理由。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)不少于100；

2. 可適當加入細節(jié)，以使內容充實、行文連貫；

3. 信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear John,

I am pleased to hear from you. Now I will

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear John,

I am pleased to hear from you. Now I will tell you something about my winter holiday.

As is the same with every year, the Spring Festival was in the middle of the holiday, so it goes without saying that spending some precious time with the family during the festival was the most important thing to do in this holiday. Of course we had dinners with delicious food and parties with classmates and friends.

However, I did not forget that I would take the College Entrance Examination in about 3 months. I made full use of my time to prepare myself for the examination, as I could not fail my first real test in my life.

My dream university is Nankai University, which is located in my city, providing a wide range of courses for us to choose from. I believe that Nankai University will help me to achieve my goal.

Looking forward to your next letter.

Best wishes.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象。3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結構。比如providing a wide range of courses for us to choose from.是伴隨狀語做修飾。 My dream university is Nankai University, which is located in my city, providing a wide range of courses for us to choose from.是非限制性定語從句，還有倒裝句As is the same with every year, the Spring Festival was in the middle of the holiday。此外，文章還使用了大量短語hear from, it goes without, be located in, a wide range of等。以及連接副詞however的使用使文章內容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。