11．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下短文．短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
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注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
In the past，my hometown was very small．People there lived poor life and the houses are very old and shabby，some of which were even shaking in the wind．As to the traffic，it was too inconvenient that almost no tourists came．
Besides，many changes have been taken place in my hometown by now．Life hasbecome better．The houses have become larger and bright，and more people have got their own car．Everywhere is decorated of green trees and beautiful flowers．What's more，thousands of tourists from all over the world come here every year，it is really splendid．I believe my hometown will become more and more developing and beautiful．And I am proud of it．

分析 本文主要介紹作者的家鄉(xiāng)．以前，人們過著貧窮的生活，房屋破敗，交通不便；現(xiàn)在，發(fā)生了很大的變化：生活變好了，房子又大又明亮，每年成千上萬的旅游者來參觀．作者相信，家鄉(xiāng)將會(huì)變得更發(fā)達(dá)和漂亮．

解答 In the past，my hometown was very small．People there lived∧poor life and the houses are very old and shabby，some of which were even shaking in the wind．As to the traffic，it was too inconvenient that almost no tourists came．
Besides，many changes have been taken place in my hometown by now．Life hasbecome better．The houses have become larger and bright，and more people have got their own car．Everywhere is decorated of green trees and beautiful flowers．What's more，thousands of tourists from all over the world come here every year，it is really splendid．I believe my hometown will become more and more developing and beautiful．And I am proud of it．
詳解：
1．加a 考查固定搭配．live a…life意為"過…的生活"，是固定搭配．
2．a(chǎn)re改為were 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．此處講述的是過去的事情，要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)．              
3．too改為so 考查固定句型．so…that…意為"如此/這么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副詞，常常用來修飾形容詞或副詞，常用句型為：主語+謂語+so+adj．/adv．+that從句．  
4．Besides改為However 考查副詞．however表示轉(zhuǎn)折，尤其用于談及一個(gè)既成事實(shí)時(shí)，表示轉(zhuǎn)折，其意為"可是""仍然"等．可放在句首、句中或句末，通常用逗號(hào)與句子其他成分隔開．
5．去掉been 考查動(dòng)詞語態(tài)．take place是不及物動(dòng)詞短語，沒有被動(dòng)語態(tài)，been是多余的，要去掉．          
6．bright改為brighter 考查形容詞比較級(jí)．a(chǎn)nd是并列連詞，它前后連接兩個(gè)相同的語法成分，larger和brighter都是形容詞比較級(jí)作表語．         
7．car改為cars 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．car與people一致，要用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
8．of改為with 考查介詞．be decorated with意為"被用…裝飾"，是固定搭配．
9．it改為which 考查定語從句．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)定語從句，先行詞是前面整個(gè)句子，在從句中作主語，用關(guān)系代詞which．        
10．developing改為developed 考查過去分詞．developed意為"（國家，地區(qū)）（經(jīng)濟(jì)、社會(huì)）發(fā)達(dá)的"，developing意為"發(fā)展中的"，此處應(yīng)是：（國家，地區(qū)）（經(jīng)濟(jì)、社會(huì)）發(fā)達(dá)的．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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