Question

假如你是新華中學學生李華，在最近舉行的市高中生英語口語大賽中獲得了一等獎。某英語報社邀請你寫一篇稿件，介紹你練習英語口語的經(jīng)驗。稿件內(nèi)容如下：

1．樹立自信，克服羞怯心理；

2．多參加英語角活動；

3．多看英語新聞（如CCTV-9）

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120-150；

2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I'm Li Hua from Xinghua Middle School. Now I'd like to share my experience in practicing oral Enghsh.

Firstly, I'm always confident and brave. I seize every opportunity to speak, not afraid of making mistakes which may embarrass me. I also find it of great benefit to take part in English corners, where I make many friends. By talking with them, my oral English has improved a lot. Finally, some English programs like CCTV-9 contribute to the prograss in my speaking ability. Through this channel, not only am I kept informed of the current events going on both at home and abroad, I also learn the standard pronunciation and intonation by repeated imitation.

Practice makes perfect, as the saying goes. Our hard work will finally be rewarded.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式作文：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。因為只是提綱，沒有具體的要點，要根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】I'm always confident and brave. I seize every opportunity to speak, not afraid of making mistakes which may embarrass me. I also find it of great benefit to take part in English corners, where I make many friends. 這兩句話都用了非限制性定語從句，By talking with them, my oral English has improved a lot. some English programs like CCTV-9 contribute to the prograss in my speaking ability. 這句話用的是動名詞的用法，Through this channel, not only am I kept informed of the current events going on both at home and abroad, I also learn the standard pronunciation and intonation by repeated imitation.這句話用了倒裝， Practice makes perfect, as the saying goes. 這里用了諺語。還有文章用了Firstly,Finally,這樣的詞，讓文章更加連貫。

考點：考查提綱類短文