Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^）。并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

      2 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

Miss Brown,

We have received your application last week. We regret to informing you that our company has hired other girl for the job of secretary. Having careful studied your certificate, we decided that we should need someone with more office’s experience for this particular position. You have impressed us，but, with your desire to learn and your ability to work hard, we do hope that you will apply a position in our company sometimes in the future. We would like to thank you for your interesting in our company. Please contact to us if there are any further questions.

                                                                   Yours，

                                                                   John Smith

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Miss Brown,

We have received your application last week. We regret to informing you that our company

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has hired other girl for the job of secretary. Having careful studied your certificate, we decided

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that we should need someone with more office’s experience for this particular position. You

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have impressed us，but, with your desire to learn and your ability to work hard, we do hope that

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you will apply∧ a position in our company sometimes in the future. We would like to thank

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you for your interesting in our company. Please contact to us if there are any further questions.

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Yours，

                                                         John Smith

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