Question

四、短文改錯（滿分10分）

假如英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

    增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）, 并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

       2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday. There were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunate, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luck. Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions. Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers.      

Answer 1

My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday. There were lots of visitors stood in

                                                                   standing

front of the ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain

                                          bought

of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps

               so                   frightening

through the crowd. Unfortunate, I got separated from my parents. I had ∧  hard time looking

Unfortunately                               a    

for him, but I had no luck. Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions. Worse

   them                                      lonely

still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers.

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