Question

你校英文報(bào)社在“世界無(wú)煙日 (World No-Smoking Day)”前夕征集關(guān)于吸煙危害健康的英語(yǔ)文章，請(qǐng)你為其投稿。內(nèi)容至少包括以下要點(diǎn)：

1．吸煙會(huì)危害自身及他人的健康；

2．世界衛(wèi)生組織 (The WHO) 聲稱每年至少兩百萬(wàn)人死于與吸煙有關(guān)的疾��；

3．呼吁：吸煙者戒煙；公共場(chǎng)所禁煙；青少年遠(yuǎn)離香煙……

首句已給出，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)：120左右。

As is known to us all, smoking does harm to not only smokers themselves but also people around them.                                                                    

                                                                      

 

Answer 1

【答案】

As is known to us all, smoking does harm to not only smokers themselves but also people around them. Smoking can lead to various diseases, like heart trouble, cancer and other problems. The WHO says diseases related to smoking kill at least two million people each year. Though it is not easy for the smokers to give up smoking, I hope they should try to stop smoking for the health of themselves and others. And our government should make laws which ban smoking in public places.

Since smoking is so harmful, I hope all the teenagers would not try to start to smoke and form healthy habits.  （106 words）

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類作文的寫作。寫關(guān)于世界無(wú)煙日的文章，文章的要點(diǎn)都給了出來(lái)，考生需要做的就是把要點(diǎn)翻譯成英語(yǔ)即可，注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接各要點(diǎn)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類作文的關(guān)鍵在于表達(dá)方式的選擇和要點(diǎn)的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。因?yàn)楸疚牡囊�求是不能寫出提綱式，所以在寫作的時(shí)候要變換句式，要寫得更為親切直白。不要過(guò)去堆砌。