Question

【寫作內(nèi)容】

目前，學校存在少數(shù)學生作弊的現(xiàn)象。某英文雜志社擬對此現(xiàn)象向中學生征文，標題是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations.”請根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一篇英文稿。

內(nèi)容要點如下：

【寫作要求】

只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。

【評分標準】

句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

Answer 1

One possible version:

Though it is a pity, we’ve to regretfully admit that now a few students like cheating when they’re having exams at school & I think there are some reasons for them to do so. However, the most possible ones may go like this: there are too many exams which are too difficult but some of the students are often lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. So when taking exams, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.

In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in exams because it breaks the rules of schools & and we students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in exams. What's more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for exams.

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文為提綱作文。寫作對象：考試中的作弊現(xiàn)象，貼近學生生活，且寫作要點要求具體，考生應是有話可說。因為所寫為目前存在形象，所以本文的基本時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時。另外，要注意表述的條理性。

寫作亮點：該篇范文，要點全面，采用兩段式，層次感強且做到了主次分明。此外，該篇文章用語恰當（例如：“Though it is a pity, we’ve to regretfully admit that…”）。更難能可貴的是，其連接性詞/短語的合理使用（例如：“However, In my opinion, What's more,”）及句式的恰到好處的轉(zhuǎn)換（例如：定語從句“there are too many exams which are too difficult”，省略句“So when taking exams, they sometimes cheat”）使得文章連貫而自然，實為考場中的上乘之作。