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10．近年來私家車的增多，引起了一些社會問題．有些大城市正在考慮是否控制汽車的總量，但不同的人有不同的觀點(diǎn)和看法．請根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文．開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
1．支持者認(rèn)為：可解決交通擁堵問題，并且能減少環(huán)境污染．
2．反對者認(rèn)為：私家車方便出行，快捷和省時，并且能促進(jìn)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展．
3．你的觀點(diǎn)和建議．
The rapid increase of private cars in recent years has brought about some social problems．                 ．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一篇短文．隨著私家車的增多，引起了一些社會問題．有些大城市正在考慮是否控制汽車的總量，不同的人有不同的觀點(diǎn)和看法，闡述支持者或反對者的觀點(diǎn)及自己的觀點(diǎn)．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．支持者認(rèn)為：可解決交通擁堵問題，并且能減少環(huán)境污染；2．反對者認(rèn)為：私家車方便出行，快捷和省時，并且能促進(jìn)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展；3．你的觀點(diǎn)和建議．
寫作時人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
重要短語：cause problems（引起問題），be crowded（擁擠），traffic jams（交通阻塞），sth be available（可得到，可利用），be encouraged to do sth（盯鼓勵某人做某事），promote sth （提升，促進(jìn)某物），contribute to sth （促進(jìn)，有助于某事），bring convenience to sth （帶來便捷），raise the cost of sth（提高成本），take measures to do sth （采取措施作某事），solve the problem （解決問題），regulate the traffic（管理交通）．
【高分句型】
1．They suggest cities improve public transportation and people be encouraged to ride bicycles．
They suggest cities improve the management of traffic and raise the cost of using cars．
兩個句子都是由"suggest"構(gòu)成的賓語從句，從句中用了虛擬語氣，省略should．
2．They hold the opinion①that the increase of private cars will promote the car industry，②which contributes greatly to the development of the country's economy．
①此處是由that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句，that在從句中起連接詞的作用，無意義，that引導(dǎo)的從句解釋說明名詞"opinion"的內(nèi)容．
②此處是由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which在從句中作主語，指代前面主句的內(nèi)容．

解答 How I Overcame Depression
The rapid increase of private cars in recent years has caused some social problems．Some big cities are considering whether to control the number of cars．Different people have different ideas about it．（引出話題）
Some people think it necessary to do so．For one thing，the roads are so crowded that traffic jams can be seen everywhere．For another，there're not enough parking areas available for cars．Besides，by controlling ears，we can reduce air pollution around us．They suggest cities improve public transportation and people be encouraged to ride bicycles．【高分句型】（支持者的觀點(diǎn)）
However，some people think it unreasonable．They hold the opinion that the increase of private cars will promote the car industry，which contributes greatly to the development of the country's economy．【高分句型】Moreover，cars bring convenience to people and save them a lot of time．They suggest cities improve the management of traffic and raise the cost of using cars．【高分句型】（反對者的觀點(diǎn)）
In my opinion，we should take measures to solve the problem．Laws should be passed to regulate the traffic．And cities should build more subways so that people can have a better choice for travel．

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