Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩赴，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（八），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞。

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

It was Grandpa’s birthday party. It was not easy to have his children and grandchildren all back home together. so they just busied themselves in playing their cellphones, totally ignored their grandpa, who let in a deep sigh and left the party.

There is no doubt whether cellphones have a negative impact on our lives. Heavy use of cellphones actually widen the distance between teenagers and their elders, leaving the elders more lonely. Worsely still, addiction to cellphones might also lead to teenagers’ poor performance at school, which adds up to elders’ worries.

As far as I was concerned, it’s necessary to limit the time we spend using cellphones. And I attach great importance to communicate with our family members face to face, which helps build a harmony family atmosphere.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】so改為but

【2】ignored 改為 ignoring

【3】in 改為 out

【4】whether改為 that

【5】widen 改為widens

【6】Worsely 改為 Worse

【7】up 去掉

【8】was改為am

【9】communicate 改為communicating

【10】harmony 改為harmonious

【解析】

試題分析: 當(dāng)今，很多青少年擁有手機(jī)，而越來越多的長(zhǎng)輩因?yàn)橥磔呍诩彝ゾ蹠?huì)上只顧玩手機(jī)，卻不和他們聊天感到萬分失落。

【1】So改為but �？疾檫B詞辨析。so所以，表順承；but但是，表轉(zhuǎn)折。依據(jù)文意這里應(yīng)該為轉(zhuǎn)折，故So改為but。

【2】ignored 改為 ignoring。考查現(xiàn)在分詞�，F(xiàn)在分詞表示某動(dòng)作一直持續(xù)著或者一直保持某種狀態(tài)。文意“忽視”這一狀態(tài)作伴隨狀語，故ignored 改為 ignoring。

【3】In 改為 out�？疾樵~組搭配。let out 發(fā)出。let out a deep and left the party嘆了一口氣便離開了聚會(huì)。故In 改為 out。

【4】Whether改為 that�？疾榇�詞用法。There is no doubt that…這毋庸置疑……這里在否定句和疑問句中,doubt后面接that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，在肯定句中,doubt后面一般接whether或if引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。故Whether改為 that。

【5】Widen 改為widens�？疾橹髦^一致。Heavy use of cellphones為主語從句，作句子的主語，其后接第三人稱單數(shù)，故Widen 改為widens。

【6】Worsely 改為 worse �？疾樵~組搭配。worse still,更糟糕的是；更壞。Worse無Worsely形式，副詞形式應(yīng)為badly.故Worsely 改為 worse。

【7】Up 去掉�？疾樵~組搭配。add up加起來; 總計(jì)which adds to elders’ worries這增加了長(zhǎng)輩的憂慮。Add作增加意思不需要加介詞up，故Up 去掉。

【8】was改為am。考查主謂一致。As far as I am concerned，就我而言。這里無需時(shí)態(tài)變化，是就事發(fā)表評(píng)論。

【9】Communicate 改為communicating�？疾樵~組搭配。attach great importance to communicating，這里的to不是不定式，是介詞。attach great importance to高度重視

【10】Harmony 改為harmonious。考查詞性辨析。Harmony，名詞，協(xié)調(diào);融洽。這里要改為其形容詞形式harmonious來修飾family。故Harmony 改為harmonious。