Question

6．下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．

When I was boy，the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival．My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes．One time，I just couldn't wait to the Spring Festival dinner．Since I was about to take a piece from a cooked duck，I see Grandma in the kitchen looking at me．Shake her head，she said，"It isn't a good time to do that，dear．"At once I apologized and controlled me at my best till the dinner started．You know，the dinner was that we had waited for several month．

Answer 1

分析 小時(shí)候，最激動(dòng)的事情就是過(guò)年．祖母是世界上最棒的廚師，總能做出最好吃的菜．有一次我想偷吃她做的烤鴨，被祖母看到了．我知道要和家人一起吃，那可是等候幾個(gè)月的大餐．

解答 When I was∧boy，the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival．My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes．One time，I just couldn't wait to the Spring Festival dinner．Since I was about to take a piece from a cooked duck，I see Grandma in the kitchen looking at me．Shake her head，she said，"It isn't a good time to do that，dear．"At once I apologized and controlled me at my best till the dinner started．You know，the dinner was that we had waited for several month．
詳解：
1．加a；冠詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是泛指，要用不定冠詞來(lái)限定．
2．when去掉；句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤．句中to celebrate the Spring Festival作系動(dòng)詞的表語(yǔ)，不需要加when；when加不定式構(gòu)成的復(fù)合不定式短語(yǔ)，表示的是什么時(shí)候去做某事．
3．but改為and；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是并列，不是轉(zhuǎn)折．
4．to改為for；短語(yǔ)搭配錯(cuò)誤．wait for等候．
5．Since改為When/As；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是當(dāng)…時(shí)候．
6．see改為saw；時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤．文章講述的是過(guò)去的事情，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．
7．Shake改為Shaking；分詞錯(cuò)誤．句中shake與主語(yǔ)she之間構(gòu)成主謂關(guān)系，要用現(xiàn)在分詞形式作伴隨狀語(yǔ)．
8．me改為myself；短語(yǔ)搭配錯(cuò)誤．control oneself控制自己．
9．that改為what；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句中we had waited for作系動(dòng)詞的表語(yǔ)，是一個(gè)表語(yǔ)從句；從句for缺少賓語(yǔ)，且句意指代的是物，要用what來(lái)連接．
10．month改為months；名詞錯(cuò)誤．句中有several修飾，名詞要用復(fù)數(shù)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．常考的知識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來(lái)用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．