Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。上星期六，你和同學(xué)們參觀了中國(guó)近五年偉大成就展。請(qǐng)按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，以“A Visit to the Exhibition on China’s Achievements”為題，給�？�“英語(yǔ)角”寫(xiě)一篇英文稿件，介紹參觀的全過(guò)程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

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Answer 1

【答案】Last Saturday, my classmates and I went to the Beijing Exhibition Hall to see the exhibition on China’s achievements in the last 5 years which turned out to be a memorable experience for us.

The exhibition attracted thousands of people all over the country, so we had to wait a long time to get in. Luckily, we met a docent who gave us a detailed introduction of the development during these years. We Listened attentively and were deeply impressed by the brilliant success of our country. When we stepped into the Hi-tech display section, our eyes were caught by the fashionable appearance of the high-speed train model “Fuxing”, which is popularly called one of the “New Four Great Inventions” of China. We were so amazed at the exhibits that we couldn’t help taking pictures all the time. Before leaving, with the words “Chinese Dream” as a setting, we had a group photo to record the great moment.

The visit to the Exhibition gives us greater faith in Chinese dream, to which our personal dreams are closely related.

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇看圖作文。上星期六，你和同學(xué)們參觀了中國(guó)近五年偉大成就展。請(qǐng)按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，以“A Visit to the Exhibition on China’s Achievements”為題，給�？�“英語(yǔ)角”寫(xiě)一篇英文稿件，介紹參觀的全過(guò)程。認(rèn)真閱讀四幅圖畫(huà)，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

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