Question

請你根據(jù)下列表格中的內(nèi)容以 “Water Conservation” 為題寫一篇英語短文，號召同學(xué)們節(jié)水護水。

Importance	水是大自然賜予的珍貴禮物； 無水則無生命；
Current situation	因工業(yè)發(fā)展而受污染的水域增多； 人們?nèi)狈��?jié)水意識 (舉一例)； 據(jù)報道，20年來缺水的國家已上升至100多個。
Future situation	爆發(fā)戰(zhàn)爭；淚水將是地球上的最后一滴水。
Things we can do	做節(jié)水表率； ……。

注意：

1、短文必須包括以上要點，適當發(fā)揮；

2、詞數(shù)：120左右；

3、提示詞：珍貴的precious 缺水water shortage

Water Conservation

Water is of great importance to human beings.______________________

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Answer 1

Water Conservation

Water is of great importance to human beings. It’s a precious gift from nature, without which there would be no life.

With industry developing, however, more waters are being polluted. And many people lack the sense of saving water. They often leave water running while brushing their teeth. It’s reported that the number of the countries suffering water shortage has increased to over 100 in the past 20 years. If this continues, wars may break out and the last drop of water on Earth would be our tears.

As a middle school student, we must save every drop of water in our daily life, setting an example to the people around us. In addition, we should make every effort to fight against any action of polluting and wasting water.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求以“Water Conservation”為題寫一篇英語短文，號召同學(xué)們節(jié)水護水。寫作要點包括：水資源的重要性；水資源的現(xiàn)狀；水資源的未來；自己的建議等四個方面；詞數(shù)在120詞左右，注意使用參考詞匯；不要出現(xiàn)標點和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點說明：范文涵蓋了所有的要點，使用了一些重要的語法知識和句子結(jié)構(gòu)，使用了較多的短語和搭配；還使用了一些詞和短語銜接上下文。

語法方面：定語從句without which there would be no life；with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)with industry developing；主語從句It’s reported that the number of the countries；條件句If this continues；非謂語動詞setting an example to the people around us等，具備了較強的語言運用能力，語法基礎(chǔ)扎實；

句子結(jié)構(gòu)方面：范文使用however, In addition, As a middle school student等進行銜接句子和段落，使作文語意連貫、連接緊密；

短語和搭配方面：范文使用了of great importance to, increase to, break out, make every effort to do, fight against等短語和搭配，使作文的內(nèi)容更加充實。

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