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3．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的高中生李華．你校擬選拔一批優(yōu)秀學(xué)生，利用暑假到希望中學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語，你希望參加此活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給校評(píng)選組一封申請(qǐng)信：
1．對(duì)此活動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)（如對(duì)本人、學(xué)生及社會(huì)的益處等）；
2．個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)（如性格、獨(dú)立生活能力、語言能力等）；
3．你的計(jì)劃（如怎樣進(jìn)行輔導(dǎo)等）．
注意：
1．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．詞數(shù)100左右．（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)）．
參考詞匯：
希望中學(xué)Hope Junior School
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe that teaching English for pupils from Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which will result in a lot of social benefits．
Having a good command of English，I can speak English fluently．In addition，I'm warm-hearted and willing to help others in need．So I think I am qualified for being the pupils'English coach．That's why I apply for the position；I hope I can join in the instructive activity．
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to develop their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．I hope you can offer the opportunity．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封申請(qǐng)信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一自我介紹以及對(duì)此活動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)；二闡明個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)；表達(dá)自己的希望；三闡述自己的計(jì)劃并在此表達(dá)愿望．
高分句型：
1．As far as I am concerned，I believe that teaching English for pupils from Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which will result in a lot of social benefits．句子里As far as I am concerned表示"就我而言"；teaching English for pupils from Hope School 是動(dòng)名詞做賓語從句的主語；which 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指主句；result in 表示"導(dǎo)致"．
就我而言，我相信為希望中學(xué)的學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語對(duì)小學(xué)生和充當(dāng)老師的高中生都有好處，這樣都社會(huì)有很多好處．
2．What's more important is to develop their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．句子里What's more important 是主語從句，表示"更重要的是"；介詞in 后有l(wèi)earning English as a foreign language做賓語；creating a good learning environment是結(jié)果狀語．
更重要的是會(huì)養(yǎng)成他們學(xué)習(xí)英語的興趣，創(chuàng)造出一個(gè)好的學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
      I'm Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe that teaching English for pupils from Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which will result in a lot of social benefits．【高分句型一】（自我介紹以及對(duì)此活動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)）
      Having a good command of English，I can speak English fluently．In addition，I'm warm-hearted and willing to help others in need．So I think I am qualified for being the pupils'English coach．That's why I apply for the position；I hope I can join in the instructive activity．（闡明個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)；表達(dá)自己的希望）
      My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to develop their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．【高分句型二】I hope you can offer the opportunity．（闡述自己的計(jì)劃并在此表達(dá)愿望）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

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