湯姆因在學校使用手機被學校處分，他感到很困惑，寫信給你求助。請根據(jù)以下結(jié)構提示給湯姆回信。開頭結(jié)尾已給出。高@考☆資&源*網(wǎng)

Beginning: Your letter reached me yesterday. It said in your letter that……..

Paragraph 1: 手機的優(yōu)點：聯(lián)系便捷高@考☆資&源*網(wǎng)

Paragraph 2: 帶手機上學存在的問題：干擾教學，有害學習和健康

Ending: It is right for school to prevent you from using cell phones in school.

 

 

 

Your letter reached me yesterday. It said in your letter that you were punished for using cell phones, which puzzled you. 高@考☆資&源*網(wǎng)

There is no doubt that cell phones can bring us much convenience. We can keep in touch with friends and families wherever we are. Besides, the cell phone is a way to have fun.

However, there are some problems with using cell phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the class. It has been proved that using cell phones frequently does harm to health. Another problem is that some students can spend too much time and money on cell phones and sending messages, which will result in bad results in study.

As a student, you should concentrate on study. It is right for school to prevent you from using cell phones.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語keep in touch with與。。保持聯(lián)系；does harm to對。。有害；spend time on sth在。�；ㄙM時間；result in 導致；concentrate on 集中精力于；There is no doubt that cell phones can bring us much convenience.這個句子中不僅僅用到there is no doubt that毫無疑問這個句型，還用到高級詞匯convenience；Another problem is that some students can spend too much time and money on cell phones and sending messages, which will result in bad results in study.這個句子中that引導表語從句，which 引導非限制性定語從句；It is right for school to prevent you from using cell phones這個句子中it做形式主語；

考點： 提綱類作文

 

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