假設(shè)你是李華，最近你與最好的朋友之間發(fā)生了一件不愉快的事情，使你很苦惱無(wú)措，所以寫(xiě)信給某英文報(bào)“HEART—TO—HEART”專(zhuān)欄的編輯Ruth求助。要點(diǎn)如下：

1．描述事情經(jīng)過(guò)；

2．表達(dá)你的感受；

3．向Ruth求助。

注意： 1．詞數(shù)：100—120；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Ruth，

I’m writing to ask you for help.__________________________________________________

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Yours

Li Hua

One possible version：

Recently I am having some trouble with my friend Helen, which makes me very upset. This is how it happened.

A few months ago, Helen did something wrong at school. She told me about it but wouldn’t like the teacher or any other classmate to know it. So she asked me to keep it a secret. I promised her. But then one day, Helen came back from the teacher’s office and shouted at me angrily, saying that I had broken my promise and let out her secret to the teacher. But I really did not do it. However hard I tried to explain to her, she simply wouldn’t listen to me and decided to break up with me. I feel greatly wronged but really do not know what to do. This event affects my normal life and study. Can you help me with my trouble?

I am looking forward to your reply.

【解析】

試題分析：

根據(jù)提示可知，這是一篇書(shū)信類(lèi)作文。書(shū)信類(lèi)作文和一般的話題作文或材料作文不同，它主要由三部分組成：開(kāi)始，正文，結(jié)束語(yǔ)。在文章的開(kāi)始部分要以簡(jiǎn)短的語(yǔ)句表明自己的意圖及簡(jiǎn)單的自我介紹。第二段詳細(xì)描述寫(xiě)作意圖。分析出題者的要求可知，并沒(méi)有詳細(xì)說(shuō)是某件事，這給寫(xiě)作者留下很大的發(fā)揮空間。所以在第二段描述事件發(fā)展經(jīng)過(guò)的時(shí)候，可以根據(jù)自己的寫(xiě)作能力選擇描述一件生活中發(fā)生的事情。并向編輯Ruth請(qǐng)求幫助。在寫(xiě)完正文之后，就只剩下結(jié)束語(yǔ)了�？梢栽谧詈笠欢伪砻髯约旱目鄲篮驼�(qǐng)求，也可以只用一到兩句常用語(yǔ)結(jié)束全文。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明，尤其是文章的篇章布局讓閱卷老師一目了然。如在文章的第一段以非限制性定語(yǔ)從句Recently I am having some trouble with my friend Helen, which makes me very upset表明自己的苦惱和寫(xiě)作意圖，然后以This is how it happened表示事件的開(kāi)始。第二段以A few months ago開(kāi)頭，交待了事件發(fā)生的時(shí)間，之后長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，如She told me about it but wouldn’t like the teacher or any other classmate to know it.和 I promised her. 再以轉(zhuǎn)折連詞引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)But then one day可知，事情的發(fā)展起了變化。最后以This event affects my normal life and study表明這件事對(duì)自己的影響，同時(shí)也是這件事的結(jié)束部分。值得一提的是在描述事情的開(kāi)始，發(fā)展，轉(zhuǎn)折和結(jié)束的過(guò)程中，作者用到了很多高級(jí)詞匯和短語(yǔ)，例如break one’s promise, let out her secret, break up with me和looking forward to等等。這也是文章的一大亮點(diǎn)。

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