Question

5．假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國朋友Tom上個月來到北京學(xué)習(xí)．7月份你將去北京參加英語演講比賽（speech contest），你在資料搜集和語言運用等方面遇到了困難．請根據(jù)以下要點給Tom寫一封電子郵件：
1．詢問Tom的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況；
2．談?wù)勀愕睦щy并請求Tom幫忙；
3．告訴Tom你打算賽后去看他．
注意：詞數(shù)100詞左右；可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Dear Tom，
                                                                              
Yours sincerely
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文，由于是討論Tom現(xiàn)在的情況和自己的安排，所以應(yīng)該以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)為主，用第一人稱來敘述．主要分成三部分：一 詢問Tom的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況；二 自己的困難并請求Tom幫忙；三
自己的打算．
高分句型：
1．It is reported that（引導(dǎo)主語從句） the weather there is very hot and dry these days，which（引導(dǎo)定語從句） is very different from that of your country
據(jù)說那里的天氣又熱又干燥，完全不同于你們國家的天氣．
2．I am glad to tell you that （引導(dǎo)賓語從句）I will go to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest in July，which（定語從句） is not only an honor，but also a great opportunity for me to improve myself
我非常高興的告訴你在七月份我要去北京參加一個英語演講比賽，這不僅是一份榮譽，而且是提高自我的一個機會．

解答 Dear Tom，
How time flies!You have been studying in Beijing for nearly a month，during which you must have achieved a lot．Well，how's everything going？It is reported that the weather there is very hot and dry these days，which is very different from that of your country（高分句型一）．Have you adapted to it？In addition，you once complained that the food served there was not to you taste．I hope that should have been improved（詢問Tom的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況）．
I am glad to tell you that I will go to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest in July，which is not only an honor，but also a great opportunity for me to improve myself．（高分句型二） And now I try my best to make preparations for it．However，I have some trouble in collecting the materials relevant and using of the language．I will appreciate it if you give me a hand to solve the problems（自己的困難并請求Tom幫忙）．
After the contest，I am to drop in at your school to visit you．Please waiting for my phone（自己的打算）．
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 這是一篇半開放性的作文，要點給出來的并不多，需要考生自行組織，同時也給考生一定的空間，在寫作時要注意謀篇布局．在寫作時要注意使用高級的詞匯與高級的句型，不要遺漏任何的要點，同時要使用合適的連接詞來連接整個文章，使文章更有條理性．