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第二節(jié)書面表達（滿分25分）?
高考臨近，許多家長用金錢、旅游等承諾鼓勵孩子努力學習，考上一所好大學。假定你是高三學生李華，請根據(jù)所提供的有關信息，給某英文報社寫封短信。?
內容要點：1.許多家長用金錢、旅游等承諾鼓勵孩子努力學習，考上一所好大學；?        2.可能會導致學生只關注物質獎勵，而減少學習樂趣；?
3.一旦獲得想要的獎勵就失去了學習動力；?
4.你的建議。 ?
注意：1.不要逐詞逐句地翻譯。?
2.為使語句連貫，可以適當增加細節(jié)。?
3.詞數(shù)100左右。短信開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總數(shù)。 ?
Dear Editor,?
With the college entrance examination approaching,……?
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Yours truly,?
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Editor,?
With the college entrance examination approaching, many parents try to encourage their children to study hard and be admitted into a famous university. They promise that they will be rewarded with things such as money, traveling and so on once they achieve the goals.?
However, I don’t think this is a proper way. Firstly, it may lead to the fact that children’s attention will focus on such things instead of the pleasure of studying. Secondly, they may stop working hard as soon as they get what they want. ?
I think a wise way is to make us aware of the importance of going to a good ?university. We should also study hard and well for our future.?
Yours truly,?
Li Hua

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