Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，最近你獲悉:為了讓世界更好地了解中國，你市將舉行”中國好故事--我眼中的中國”演講比賽。請根據(jù)以下要點提示，給你的留學生好朋友John寫一封郵件，鼓勵他參加。內(nèi)容包括:

1.活動宗旨；

2.比賽時間、報名方式；

3.適當建議。

注意:

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯:中國好故事--我眼中的中國:Chinese Story--China in my eye

Dear John,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

In order to get China deeply unknown to the whole world and showcase China’s remarkable progress in recent decades to the world, our city is to launch a speech competition called Chinese Story---China in my eyes. Knowing that you have been studying in China for several years and are extremely familiar with the development of China, I’m writing to encourage you to participate in it.

The competition will be held on the 28th next month, which will ensure you enough time to make preparations for it. But you are supposed to sign up on the Internet before the end of this month. Whoever is interested in it is welcome to join. As a foreign student, you have witnessed the great improvement of Chinese people’s life and the rapid development of the society. Therefore, I’m convinced that it’s you that must be the very person to win the game. Of course, it’s suggested that you focus your topic more on Chin’s new “four great inventions”--------high speed rail, shared bike, online shopping or Alipay.

Looking forward to your participation and good performance.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封信，邀請你的留學生朋友參加演講比賽。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

寫作內(nèi)容：1.活動宗旨；

2.比賽時間、報名方式；

3.適當建議。

第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）

Launch a speech；be familiar with；participate in；make preparations for；be supposed to；

sign up；be interested in；focus on；look forward to

第三步：連詞成句

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改