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假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華，校報(bào)英語園地正在開展征稿活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，將你們班近期美化教室的活動(dòng)記述下來，向校報(bào)投稿。詞數(shù)不少于60。

                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

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Last month, our monitor suggested at a class meeting that we do something to decorate our classroom. Some classmates wanted to hang several pretty pictures on the wall, while others thought it would be great to put some plants in the classroom. Most of us preferred the second idea. In the following week, a variety of beautiful plants were brought to the school, which immediately created a relaxing atmosphere. Every day after class, we devoted our spare time into caring these plants, watering them regularly. With fragrant flowers around us, we felt at peace with ourselves and it surely helped us reduce some stress.

試題分析：此書面表達(dá)有圖畫兼文字提示，因此在動(dòng)筆前先要審閱提示在整篇文章中，努力避免只是用一、兩個(gè)句式。要靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，如主從復(fù)合句、定語從句、分詞短語、介詞短語等。要把每一副圖片的內(nèi)容描述清楚，不用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞，連接起來，是文章意思上下連貫，符合語言環(huán)境。盡量避免重復(fù)使用同一單詞或詞組。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如we devoted our spare time into caring these plants, watering them regularly With fragrant flowers around us。還運(yùn)用了which immediately created a relaxing atmosphere定語從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如： Some classmates， while others thought，In the following week, Every day after class,等等。
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