Question

廣州某電視臺打算開辦一個面向中學生觀眾的英語節(jié)目，新聘任了來自英國的John作為節(jié)目編輯助理�，F(xiàn)在，John就節(jié)目內(nèi)容向廣大中學生征求意見。
寫作內(nèi)容:
假如你是學生李華，建議開辦“廣州全接觸”（All-round Guangzhou）節(jié)目。請根據(jù)以下節(jié)目設想給John寫信：

節(jié)目內(nèi)容	介紹廣州的歷史、教育、著名景點、飲食、名人
播出時間	每周六、日，方便學生周末觀看
其他設想	邀請中學生參加節(jié)目，提高學生的收看興趣
開辦理由	1．中學生可以更多地了解廣州文化，在亞運會期間向外國游客介紹廣州 有助于提高中學生的英語水平
預期效果	將會受到中學生的歡迎

 
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Dear John,
I know you’re going to set up an English program for middle school students．So I’m writing to suggest a program---“All-round Guangzhou”．
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I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration．
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

A sample version:
Dear John,
I know you’re going to set up an English program for middle school students．So I’m writing to suggest a program--- “ All-round Guangzhou”．This program will cover topics like the history, education, famous scenic spots, food and famous people of Guangzhou．It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it．Besides, you can also invite some middle school students to get involved in the program, which will surely arouse other students’ interest in it．Not only will this program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors during the 2010 Asian Games．I am sure it will be well-received by the middle school students．
I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration．
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

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