Question

“目標”在人們成長的路上發(fā)揮著重要的作用，在高二尤為重要。請你結(jié)合自身實際，按以下提示，準備一篇英語發(fā)言稿，在英語課上與同學們作交流。

1．目標的重要性；

2．如何設立目標；

3．談談你的近期目標；

4．如何實現(xiàn)你的目標。

注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右，開頭語已為你寫好；

2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Wish you to realize your dreams.

That's all.Thank you!

 

Answer 1

Dear classmates，

It's a great honor to have a chance to speak here. Today I'd like to share my thought about goals with you.

There is no denying that goals are important especially for senior students because they act as maps guiding you to where you are heading for.With a clear direction you will directly get what you want.

In my view，goals are not difficult to set. First，you should make clear what you really want. What's more，it's essential to make detailed plans which can be carried out step by step. My short－term aim is to perform wonderfully in the coming exam so that I can step into an ideal university to fulfill my dream.

To achieve this，not only will I spare no effort and make full use of every minute to be prepared，but also I will keep a positive attitude towards ups and downs in life.

Wish__you__to__realize__your__dreams.

That's__all.Thank__you!

【解析】

試題分析：

從文章體裁分析，本文是一篇記敘文的寫作，主要讓學生以“目標在人們成長的路上發(fā)揮著重要的作用，在高二尤為重要”為主題展開敘述，內(nèi)容應從包括以下四個方面來：一 ：目標的重要性。二：如何設立目標。三：談談你的近期目標。四：如何實現(xiàn)你的目標。

寫提綱作文時，一定要切題，抓住中心，緊扣要點。不要任意發(fā)揮，畫蛇添足，也不要丟三落四，要點不全。通過對眾多提示或圖畫、圖表的觀察和分析，獲取與寫作內(nèi)容有關的主要信息，并按一定的邏輯順序排列起來，找出最密切相關的要點，列出寫作提綱。

亮點說明：文章使用了非常好的短語和句子給文章增色，如head for 朝…走，you will straightly get what you want你將直接得到你想要的東西（what引導的名詞性從句），My short-term aim is to perform wonderfully in the coming exam so that I can step into an ideal university to fulfill my dream.（so that 引導的目的狀語從句）not only will I spare no effort and make full use of every minute to be prepared, but also I will keep an positive attitude towards ups and downs in life.（not only…but also 引導的并列句，且位于句首構(gòu)成了倒裝句，并且主語了句子的銜接如：What’s more，In my view等。

考點：提綱作文。