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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1）每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。
2）只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
My friend Alice loved diving very much and she dreamed of become a professional diver one day. However, at an age of 14, she got a disease which caused her to become complete deaf. Many people thought a person was deaf would not be able to dive well and advised him to give up. But Alice had thought differently. She went to school on the morning and then spent every afternoon diving. It was really difficulty for a deaf girl to dive. Therefore, she kept practising every day. So far she has won several gold medal and is still trying hard to achieve more.

Answer 1

【答案】①become→becoming

②an→the

③complete→completely

④person后加who

⑤him→her

⑥去掉had

⑦on→in

⑧difficulty→difficult

⑨Therefore→However

⑩medal→medals

【解析】本文講述了我的朋友愛麗絲克服困難成為職業(yè)跳水運(yùn)動員的故事。

①become→becoming of為介詞，后接動名詞，故become改為becoming。

②an→the at the age of“在…歲時”，故用the。

③complete→completely 副詞修飾形容詞，故用completely。

④person后加who 此處為定語從句，缺少關(guān)系代詞，先行詞為人，故用who。

⑤him→her 人稱代詞用錯，是女孩，故用her。

⑥去掉had 此處用過去時就可以了，不需用過去完成時。故去掉had。

⑦on→in in the morning“在上午”，故改為in。

⑧difficulty→difficult 此處系表結(jié)構(gòu)，用形容詞作表語，故difficulty改為difficult。

⑨Therefore→However 此處前后位轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故改成However。

⑩medal→medals 前面有several修飾，故此處應(yīng)用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)，故medal改為medals。