3．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Being responsible is actually not that difficult．I used to think it is hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society．An incident happening in a rainy Sunday afternoon changed my attitude．I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light while a girl was knocked down by passing car，which drove off quickly．A man immediately gave her first aid and I had joined in without hesitation．Soon many help was given to the girl．Because we sent her to the nearest hospitals in time，she was able to receive properly treatment．Not badly injured，I expressed gratitude to those giving help．Compared with the escaping driver，I was proud of what I did．

分析 本文作者通過講述自己親身經(jīng)歷的一件事，旨在說明在社會(huì)上做一名有責(zé)任感的人其實(shí)并不難；文中講到：在一個(gè)有雨的周日下午，當(dāng)作者在去書店的路上等綠燈時(shí)，看到一個(gè)女孩被一輛路過的汽車撞倒了；肇事司機(jī)很快駕車逃跑了，是作者與一位男士對其實(shí)施了急救后，并與許多的過 路人一起將女孩及時(shí)的送到了醫(yī)院，從而使那位女孩得到了妥善的治療；與逃跑的司機(jī)相比，作者為自己所做的一切感到自豪．

解答 Being responsible is actually not that difficult．I used to think it is hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society．An incident happening in a rainy Sunday afternoon changed my attitude．I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light while a girl was knocked down by∧passing car，which drove off quickly．A man immediately gave her first aid and I had joined in without hesitation．Soon many help was given to the girl．Because we sent her to the nearest hospitals in time，she was able to receive properly treatment．
Not badly injured，I expressed gratitude to those giving help．Compared with the escaping driver，I was proud of what I did．
詳解：
1．is改為was    考查時(shí)態(tài)     根據(jù)主句中的used to （過去常常）可知，本句描述的是過去的事情，故此處應(yīng)使用一般過去時(shí)，故用was．
2．in改為on    考查介詞    由于此處用在表示星期幾的（上）下午的前面，故用介詞on．
3．while改為when   考查句意理解以及從屬連詞    本句的意思是：我正在去書店的路上等著綠燈，這時(shí)一個(gè)女孩被一輛路過的車撞倒了；while：當(dāng)…時(shí)候，與…同時(shí)；此處意為：這時(shí)，突然；故用when．
4．by之后加a   考查不定冠詞   此處用來修飾單數(shù)名詞car，表示泛指一輛路過的汽車；故用a．
5．her改為his   考查句意理解以及人稱代詞    本句的意思是：一位男士立刻進(jìn)行了急救，我也毫不猶豫地加入了其中；此處用來修飾名詞詞組 first aid，指的是：一位男士進(jìn)行的急救；故用his．
6．many改為much   考查形容詞    many修飾可數(shù)名詞，much修飾不可數(shù)名詞；此處用來修飾不可數(shù)名詞help，故用much．
7．hospitals 改為 hospital   考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)   此處指的是：那家最近的醫(yī)院，故用單數(shù)名詞hospital．
8．properly改為proper   考查形容詞    此處用來修飾名詞treatment，故用形容詞proper．
9．I改為she   考查人稱代詞的一致性   此處在句中作主語，指的是那個(gè)被汽車撞倒的女孩；故用she．
10．escaping改為escaped   考查過去分詞   此處在句中作定語，修飾名詞driver，表示已經(jīng)完成的動(dòng)作；故用過去分詞escaped．

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯(cuò)是集語法知識與語言技能為一體的綜合性試題，主要考查學(xué)生對詞匯、語法和語篇三要素的把握能力．錯(cuò)誤類型一般有：缺詞、多詞和錯(cuò)詞．常見的錯(cuò)誤有：1 詞法錯(cuò)誤，主要包括動(dòng)詞、名詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞和介詞等詞類誤用、同義詞混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此類試題時(shí)，需要正確分析句子成分，熟練掌握各詞類的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常見句法錯(cuò)誤．通常表現(xiàn)為簡單句、復(fù)合句以及疑問句、祈使句、感嘆句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句等錯(cuò)誤．解答此類試題時(shí)，需要掌握各類句子的句式結(jié)構(gòu)及意義用法．3 應(yīng)在理解文章大意的前提下，進(jìn)行作答．

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