Question

10．假定你叫李華，你的筆友Peter來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)你校情況．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，給他回一封電子郵件．

Location	In the center of the city
Year of building	In 1957
Basic information	beautiful campus；modern teaching facilities sixty classes；about 3，000 students experienced teachers；lively and interesting classes；hard-working teachers
Achievement	educate many students of high quality one of the best schools in the city

注意：
1．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
    2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
    3．詞數(shù)100左右．
Dear Peter，
It's great to receive your e-mailNow I'd like to tell you something about our school．Our school lies in the center of the city．It was founded in 1957 and has a history of 50 years．（高分句型一）Now，there are sixty classes and about 3，000 students in our school．It has a beautiful campus and modern teaching facilities．The teachers in our school are very experienced，and they often make their classes lively and interesting．（高分句型二）Also，they all work hard and put their hearts into teaching．Many students of high quality have been educated since the founding of the school．（高分句型三）It is now one of the best schools in the city．
I'm sure our school will become more and more beautiful．                                                               
Yours，
                                                                            Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于圖表類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息你的筆友Peter來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)你校情況．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，給他回一封電子郵件，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：Location；Year of building；Basic information；Achievement 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：lie in 位于；put their hearts into 全身心的投入； experienced有經(jīng)驗(yàn)的；more and more beautiful越來(lái)越漂亮It was founded in 1957 and has a history of 50 years．（高分句型一）
The teachers in our school are very experienced，and they often make their classes lively and interesting．（高分句型二）
Many students of high quality have been educated since the founding of the school．（高分句型三

解答 Dear Peter，
       It's great to receive your e-mail．Now I'd like to tell you something about our school．Our school lies in the center of the city．It was founded in 1957 and has a history of 50 years．（高分句型一）Now，there are sixty classes and about 3，000 students in our school．It has a beautiful campus and modern teaching facilities．The teachers in our school are very experienced，and they often make their classes lively and interesting．（高分句型二）Also，they all work hard and put their hearts into teaching．Many students of high quality have been educated since the founding of the school．（高分句型三）It is now one of the best schools in the city．
      I'm sure our school will become more and more beautiful．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．