Question

13．The people around you might make or break your life．So choose them cautiously and wisely on your life journey．
注意：
　1．無需寫標(biāo)題；
　2．除詩歌外，文體不限；
　3．內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的具體事例；
　4．文中不能透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
　5．字?jǐn)?shù)不少于120詞，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
As an old saying goes，a man is known by the company he keeps．So it is of great importance to associate with those who may have a positive effect on you
正如一句老話所說，一個人以他所屬的公司而聞名，所以與那些可能對你產(chǎn)生積極影響的人交往是很重要的．
高分句型二：
There he had a deep conversation with me，without which I wouldn't have determined to break up with Henry and returned to the normal route．
曾與我長談，沒有它我就不會決定和亨利分手，回到正常的路線．

解答 As an old saying goes，a man is known by the company he keeps．So it is of great importance to associate with those who may have a positive effect on you（高分句型一）．
　　My experience in junior middle school convincingly demonstrates the point．It was at the beginning of the autumn term that I made Henry's acquaintance and became a friend of his．One day，he said to me mysteriously that he would introduce me a new world．That was the first time I had been exposed to the computer game．From that day on I was frequently dragged into the Internet bar by him，leading to my addiction to it．I still remember the occasion when I was caught skipping class to play computer games and was required to go to my head teacher's office．There he had a deep conversation with me，without which I wouldn't have determined to break up with Henry and returned to the normal route（高分句型二）．
　　A friend can influence your behavior in a positive or negative way．On no account can you afford to make a casual choice．Therefore，see to it that you choose your friends cautiously and wisely．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．