Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(Λ)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

I was working in a beer company, helped the president do something important. At the same time, my mother was in the final stages of the cancer. I worked during the day and drive 40 miles home to be with her every night. It was tired, but it was that I wanted to do. I didn’t want to bother the president with my trouble, yet I felt someone at the company needed to know about it. So I told a friend and asked him not to share the information with someone. Therefore, the president called me into his office one day. He faced me from across her large desk, looked at me and said, “Alice, I hear your mother is very ill.” I was caught by surprise and burst into tear. He just gentle said a sentence I will never forget: “Whatever you need.”

Answer 1

1.helped ---helping

2.the cancer

3.drive – drove

4.tired---tiring

5.that --- what

6.someone---anyone

7.Therefore--- However

8.her --- his

9.tear---tears

10.gentle---gently

【解析】

試題分析：

1.helped ---helping考查非謂語動詞。help和主語I之間是主謂關(guān)系，要用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。故helped ---helping。

2.the cancer 考查名詞。cancer泛指癌癥時，是不可數(shù)名詞，表示類別時，前面不用加the。故去掉the。

3.drive – drove 考查謂語動詞。本處是and連接兩個并列的謂語動作，worked為過去式，drive也應為過去式，故drive – drove。

4.tired---tiring 考查形容詞。tired感到疲勞的，多修飾人；tiring令人疲勞的，多修飾物。本處是修飾“我白天上班晚上開車40英里回家陪伴母親”這件事，要用tiring，故tired---tiring。

5.that --- what 考查表語從句。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知was后是一個表語從句，該表語從句中動詞不定式to do后缺少賓語，要用what充當，同時又引導該賓語從句。故that --- what。

6.someone---anyone 考查不定代詞。someone 某人；anyone任何人。此處是說，我把這件事告訴了一個朋友，但請求他不要讓任何人知道。故someone---anyone。

7.Therefore--- However 考查連詞。therefore 因此，表因果關(guān)系；however 然而，表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。根據(jù)下文可知總裁知道了這件事，故本句表示轉(zhuǎn)折，用however。故Therefore--- However。

8.her --- his 考查形容詞性物主代詞。本句的主語是he，故此處是指他的辦公桌，用his 不用her。 故her --- his。

9.tear---tears 考查固定短語。burst into tears突然大哭，“淚水”要用復數(shù)形式tears。故tear---tears。

10.gentle---gently 考查副詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，此處修飾動詞said，要用副詞，形容詞不能修飾動詞，故gentle---gently。

考點：考查短文改錯