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13．隨著電腦普及率的提高，老師、家長(zhǎng)和學(xué)生對(duì)字跡的重視程度降低了．據(jù)一項(xiàng)調(diào)查顯示，有85.8%的中學(xué)生說(shuō)自己的字跡不好看，而他們又不想改善字跡，其理由有很大差別．
請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖的百分比信息寫一篇120詞左右的英文短文，說(shuō)明該現(xiàn)象并發(fā)表自己的看法．開頭段已給出．

Nowadays，with the growing popularity of computers，teachers，students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting．
Nowadays，with the growing popularity of computers，teachers，students and their parents are paying lessand less attention to handwriting．
According to a recent survey，about 85.5 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting ispoor．Yet for various reasons，many students don't want to improve their handwriting.51.5 percent of thestudents think that they can just use a computer，so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting．32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise.10.9percent think that practising handwriting is useless．
As the saying goes，writing style shows the man．Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial，especially for middle school students．Therefore，in my opinion，more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇看圖作文，認(rèn)真讀圖，從圖畫中看出反映的問(wèn)題，寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer，so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting．百分之51.5的學(xué)生認(rèn)為他們只能使用電腦，所以沒有必要浪費(fèi)時(shí)間提高他們的書寫能力．句中that they can just use a computer是賓語(yǔ)從句；so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting，是由連詞so引導(dǎo)的結(jié)構(gòu)狀語(yǔ)從句．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise．百分之32.3的人認(rèn)為他們忙于學(xué)習(xí)，以至于沒有時(shí)間練習(xí)．本句是一個(gè)含有賓語(yǔ)從句的句子，在賓語(yǔ)從句that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise中，運(yùn)用了固定句型so+形容詞/副詞+that的句型．"如此…以致于…"．

解答 Nowadays，with the growing popularity of computers，teachers，students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting．【現(xiàn)象】
     According to a recent survey，about 85.5 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor．Yet for various reasons，many students don't want to improve their handwriting.51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer，so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise．（亮點(diǎn)句型二）10.9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless．【不想改變的理由】
As the saying goes，writing style shows the man．Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial，especially for middle school students．Therefore，in my opinion，more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future．【個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 看圖作文是以圖畫或圖表來(lái)提供目的、對(duì)象、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容等場(chǎng)景，要求作者借助圖畫，通過(guò)聯(lián)想將一組畫面的直觀內(nèi)容轉(zhuǎn)換成傳神達(dá)意的文字形式，用于反映圖中所表現(xiàn)的思想內(nèi)容，從寫作體裁上看，可說(shuō)明介紹，可敘事記人，可寫景狀物，也可以發(fā)表議論．看圖作文主要考查學(xué)生的觀察能力、分析能力、想象能力、創(chuàng)造能力和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力．