Question

【題目】假如你是高二某班的一名班長(zhǎng)。你所在班級(jí)的關(guān)系總體上很好，師生如同朋友、同學(xué)如同兄弟姐妹；但是，也存在一些問題，如有時(shí)因?yàn)閷W(xué)習(xí)壓力大，有些同學(xué)容易發(fā)火導(dǎo)致和其他同學(xué)吵架，有時(shí)不聽老師或家長(zhǎng)的勸告等。針對(duì)這個(gè)情況，你在一次班會(huì)上首先介紹了當(dāng)前的實(shí)際情況：好的方面和不夠好的方面；然后向同學(xué)們提出了一些建議（至少兩條）。

注意：1. 文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 詞數(shù)：120左右。

Dear classmates,

Today,I would like to say something about the relationship between students in our class. Generally speaking, the relationship between students is good. ___________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear classmates,

Today, I would like to say something about the relationship between students in our class. Generally speaking, the relationship between students is good. Teachers and students are like friends. Classmates get on well like sisters and brothers. However, there exist some problems; some students are easy to get angry because of too much study stress. What’s worse, they sometimes quarrel with others, and even don’t listen to their parents’ and teachers’ advice, which is very disappointing.

In my opinion, we, as middle school students, should make every effort to improve this situation. First we should respect our teachers and parents as well as our classmates. Second, I think that having a chat with our friends is a good way to raise our spirits. Many times, problems can be solved if people understand each other better. Finally, we can relax after a day’s work by listening to some light music or by taking some exercise.

【解析】

試題分析：假如你是高二某班的一名班長(zhǎng)。你所在班級(jí)的關(guān)系總體上很好，師生如同朋友、同學(xué)如同兄弟姐妹；但是，也存在一些問題，如有時(shí)因?yàn)閷W(xué)習(xí)壓力大，有些同學(xué)容易發(fā)火導(dǎo)致和其他同學(xué)吵架，有時(shí)不聽老師或家長(zhǎng)的勸告等。針對(duì)這個(gè)情況，你在一次班會(huì)上首先介紹了當(dāng)前的實(shí)際情況：好的方面和不夠好的方面；然后向同學(xué)們提出了一些建議（至少兩條）。寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語(yǔ)句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1. 文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 詞數(shù)：120左右。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明，布局合理，語(yǔ)言精練，同時(shí)運(yùn)用高級(jí)句子。并列句和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的使用：they sometimes quarrel with others, and even don’t listen to their parents’ and teachers’ advice, which is very disappointing.賓語(yǔ)從句的使用兼動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)做主語(yǔ)：I think that having a chat with our friends is a good way to raise our spirits.連接詞的合理使用也是一大亮點(diǎn)：Generally speaking, However, What’s worse, First；Second, Finally。