Question

【題目】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

On March 3, Eric Johnson was asleep when the family’s six-year-old Australian shepherd, Bella, woke him up. Bella was acting unpredictably, giving Johnson the sense that “something just didn’t feel right.” Bella sensed danger, and alerted the family to the tornado that soon destroyed their home.

When Johnson woke up, he turned on the TV and found out that a tornado was headed toward their town of Cookeville, Tennessee. He quickly grabbed his wife and their three children and put them in the bathtub. Nearly 45 minutes later, around 2:00 am, the tornado hit and destroyed the house. Johnson was thrown into the backyard.

Johnson said, “Bella was hiding under our bed when the tornado hit our house. She was thrown into our yard and survived and was missing after that. It was hard for us knowing she had survived but we couldn’t find her. She was the piece of our family that was missing.” The furious 175 mph twister destroyed everything in its path. The Johnsons would not have survived if not for Bella.

Johnson suffered a head injury and his wife had broken ribs, but they soon set about searching for their beloved heroic dog. They left pieces of clothing around the destroyed neighborhood, hoping that Bella would recognize the scent and find her way back home. Church friend and dog tracker Sarah Romeyn also joined in.

She borrowed cameras from a local animal rescue group and set them up in areas where people reported seeing her. She also worked with other dog trackers and even sought tips from residents with the help of the Putnam County Police Department.

When leads dried up, the Johnsons and Romeyn pressed on. “I was still finding time searching in parking lots, but it was tough. Because nobody had found a body, in rescue you can’t give up until you know you don’t have a positive outcome. And I hadn’t given up,” Romeyn said.

Paragraph 1: In time, they found a glimmer of hope when Romeyn got a call from friend Karen Ritacco, who said that Bella was behind her shop._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Romeyn was happy to play a part in the rescue, but also credits the community for their help.___________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

In time, they found a glimmer of hope when Romeyn got a call from friend Karen Ritacco, who said that Bella was behind her shop. Romeyn enlisted the help of her husband, their pastor, and Eric Johnson to get Bella. When the team had Bella trapped in the enclosed space, the poor dog began to panic, until Johnson called out to her. Romeyn said, “It was heartbreaking. You could see her stop, and you could see the wheels turning. There was something so familiar.” Then something clicked, and she recognized Johnson. Bella was home.

Paragraph 2:

Romeyn was happy to play a part in the rescue, but also credits the community for their help. “I feel like our whole community had a part in bringing Bella back. I give it all to God. So many things had to come together to make this happen.” Now that Bella is back, the Johnsons are focusing on moving forward and plan to rebuild their property. The tornado may have destroyed all of their possessions, but Johnson is just grateful that their family is together again.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫，要求續(xù)寫兩段內(nèi)容。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求續(xù)寫兩段內(nèi)容：閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文：要求續(xù)寫約翰遜夫婦在龍卷風(fēng)過后是如何在好心人的幫助下找到愛犬貝拉的以及他們對眾人幫忙的感謝。第一段：終于，當(dāng)Romeyn接到朋友Karen Ritacco的電話，說貝拉在她的店鋪后面，他們看到了一線希望。此處接著續(xù)寫，貝拉當(dāng)時被關(guān)在屋子里的狀態(tài)，約翰遜到達(dá)時，貝拉的反應(yīng)，最終認(rèn)出了是自己的主人。第二段：Romeyn很高興能參與救援，但也感謝社區(qū)的幫助。此處接著續(xù)寫整個社區(qū)的幫助才使得貝拉被找到�，F(xiàn)在貝拉回來了，約翰遜一家正專注于向前看，計(jì)劃重建他們的家，約翰遜很高興他們的家人可以再次團(tuán)聚。故事的時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如； enlist（支持、贊助），panic（驚慌），heartbreaking（令人心疼的），familiar（熟悉的），possession（財(cái)產(chǎn)），recognize （認(rèn)出），enclosed （圍住的），destroy（毀壞），rebuild（重建），property（財(cái)產(chǎn)）及grateful（感激的）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。