假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)()，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

1． 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear John,

Last summer, I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have told one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit it. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill closely to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five

hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you have interests in it, reply to me soon.

Yours,

Li Ping

1.take---took

2.have和told之間加been

3.fit后加for

4.join---joining

5.closely---close

6.so---such

7.happy---happily

8.that---which

9.把have a fun.中的a去掉

10.interests---interest

【解析】

1.take---took 根據(jù)句意可知是一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)故把take---took。

2.have和told之間加been 根據(jù)句意可知I和tell之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故在have和told之間加been。

3.fit后加for 固定搭配 be fit for…適合---，故在fit后加for。

4.join---joining 固定結(jié)構(gòu) How about doing sth.?覺(jué)得做某事怎么樣？故把join---joining。

5.closely---close 固定詞組close to…靠近---，故把closely---close。

6.so---such 句意：這么美麗的地方。place是名詞，故把so---such。

7.happy---happily 句意：幸福地唱，副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，故把happy---happily。

8.that---which 前面整個(gè)句子作先行詞，后面的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句用which引導(dǎo)，故把that---which 。

9.把have a fun.中的a去掉 固定結(jié)構(gòu)have fun.快樂(lè)，開(kāi)心。fun.前不用冠詞，故把have a fun.中的a去掉。

10.

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