Question

團隊合作(teamwork)在現(xiàn)代是非常重要的。請根據(jù)以下要點，簡要寫一篇關(guān)于teamwork的演講稿，并表明你自己的看法。詞數(shù)120左右。

為何重要：

1．是學(xué)習(xí)和工作必需的能力； 2．可節(jié)省時間，精力，資源；

3．彼此有機會相互學(xué)習(xí)；

合作對象：

1. 與志同道合的人合作容易理解，同甘共苦，心情愉快；

2. 與和自己差異較大的人合作可以學(xué)會寬容，并學(xué)會發(fā)掘別人優(yōu)點。

Answer 1

Good morning, everyone! My topic today is “Teamwork”.

In this modern world, if we want to be informed or complete our work better and more efficiently, there is an urgent need for all of us to learn to cooperate with others. Not only can cooperation save us a lot of time, energy and resources, but also we can learn much from each other.

We’ll be lucky enough to find someone who holds the same belief to cooperate with due to the fact that we can understand each other and share our joy and sorrow happily. However, it can be difficult to cooperate with someone who is different from us in many respects. In this case, we'll have to learn to put up with some of his shortcomings and try to discover his advantages.

In my opinion, teamwork means we should try to listen to others’ opinions, never force our ideas on others and if he makes mistakes, and try to point them out in a polite way.

Thanks for your listening!

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)要點寫作，同時表明自己的看法，那么文章結(jié)構(gòu)可分為：團隊合作為何重要、合作對象以及自己對團隊合作的看法。前兩點需要涵蓋題中所給的全部信息并進行擴展，可以結(jié)合自身實例。自己的看法則需邏輯清晰，字數(shù)不得少于120字，不要出現(xiàn)標點和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。

亮點說明：范文中使用了較多較好的語法知識，. not only，but also語句，倒裝句：Not only can cooperation save us a lot of time, energy and resources, but also we can learn much from each other；定語從句find someone who holds the same belief；同位語從句due to the fact that we can understand each other and share our joy and sorrow happily；it be強調(diào)句型：it can be difficult to cooperate with someone…；賓語從句：teamwork means we should try to listen to others’ opinions；祈使句：never force our ideas on others等。倒裝句，同位語從句，強調(diào)句。定語，賓語從句等語法的使用使得文章語句豐富，閱讀起來不顯乏味枯燥，提升了文章的檔次，也表現(xiàn)出靈活的語法運用。除此之外，范文中也有很多亮點詞匯：informed，urgent need，due to，share our joy and sorrow happily，in many respects，put up with，不僅使用了較多較難詞匯，且巧妙應(yīng)用了俗語，豐富了文章內(nèi)容，顯示出豐富的閱讀量。同時，范文中使用了However,，In this case, In my opinion,等短語，是文章結(jié)構(gòu)非常清晰，增加了文章的連貫性，使文章上下聯(lián)系緊密。

考點:考查材料類作文。