Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你是李華，你校的聯誼學校——美國喬治中學要招聘一名學生外聯部長，主要負責與其聯系和接待等工作。條件是英語水平高，能熟練操作計算機，熱心為兩校服務。請你據此寫一封自薦信。

參考詞匯：外聯部長director of foreign liaison department

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have learned that your school is in need of a director of foreign liaison department. I would like you to consider me for the position.

I have a great passion for English. In the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper in my school. I am familiar with computer operation and office softwares, which can help me work well. What's more, I am always ready to help others and offer good service. I think I am competent for the job. I would appreciate it if I could have the opportunity to get the job.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours ,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是應用文寫作。要點已給出，寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫，同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點說明】I have learned that your school is in need of a director of foreign liaison department.運用賓語從句； In the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper in my school. 運用現在完成時，增加文章的時態(tài)變化；I am familiar with computer operation and office softwares, which can help me work well. 運用定語從句；同時運用很多連接詞如What's more等，I think I am competent for the job. I would appreciate it if I could have the opportunity to get the job.此句式為文章增色，顯得文章很有檔次。