Question

假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，看到目前社會(huì)上很多機(jī)構(gòu)每到暑假紛紛組織形式多樣的夏令營(yíng)（summer camp），如英語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)、減肥夏令營(yíng)等等，家長(zhǎng)們踴躍送孩子去參加。你想這一現(xiàn)象向英文報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封信，說(shuō)說(shuō)自己的看法。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn)。
1. 夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)現(xiàn)狀；2. 參加原因（至少兩個(gè)）；3. 個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Editor,
Eevry summer vacation witnesses（目睹） a series of camps organized by different institutions.                                                               
Regards
Lihua

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
Every summer vacation witnesses a series of camps organized by different instituions, such as English camps, weight-losing camps, and so on, which abundantly draws/ attracts parents’ attention.
The reasons behind can be concluded as follows. To begin with, summer is absolutely a right time for children to broaden their horizons and strengthen their basis of different subjects. Meanwhile, in some parents’ opinion, it is far better to keep their chidren occupied than to leave them at home having nothing to do.
As far as I am concerned, mostly the participation of summer camps does benefit children.However, there is no need for all parents to copy something blindly. They might as well cope with it sensibly. Otherwise, negative effects won’t be avoided in terms of time, study habit, or growth.
Regards
Lihua

試題分析：考查半開(kāi)放性作文。本文的要點(diǎn)給出的較少，在描述夏令營(yíng)的現(xiàn)狀的時(shí)候，要說(shuō)明現(xiàn)在的夏令營(yíng)特別多，種類也很多，家長(zhǎng)也很踴躍。父母讓孩子參加夏令營(yíng)的原因在于希望夏令營(yíng)能夠提高孩子某方面的技能，在一些文化類的夏令營(yíng)中可以提高孩子的文化成績(jī)。在個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)方面可以批判地理解，有些對(duì)于孩子發(fā)展有利的夏令營(yíng)可以讓孩子多參加。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文對(duì)考生的要求較高，要求考生要認(rèn)真分析文字提示，篩選出要點(diǎn)，并把要點(diǎn)組織成文。寫(xiě)之前一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。