Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你剛收到了你的朋友王梅的電子郵件，她在 郵件里向你詢問在高中如何學好英語。 請你根據(jù)下列的內(nèi)容給她 寫封回信。

1. 上課認真聽講，做好筆記，課后及時復習；

2. 詞匯是基礎，每天早上花半個小時的時間背誦單詞，朗讀 課文；

3. 課外多與同學用英語交流，提高聽力和口語能力；

4. 每天堅持寫日記。

注意：1.詞數(shù) 100 詞左右，短文的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總數(shù)；2.內(nèi)容可適當發(fā)揮，注意行文連貫。

Dear Wang Mei, I’m very glad to have received your e-mail.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Wang Mei,

I’m very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.

First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons regularly after class. As we all know, vocabulary is of great importance. You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud. What’s more, try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class. In this way you can improve your listening and spoken English quickly. Last but not least, you should develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you review the words and expressions that you have learnt.

I hope you will find these suggestions useful.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求寫一封電子郵件。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封電子郵件；你剛收到了你的朋友王梅的電子郵件，她在 郵件里向你詢問在高中如何學好英語；你在回信中告訴她：1. 上課認真聽講，做好筆記，課后及時復習；2. 詞匯是基礎，每天早上花半個小時的時間背誦單詞，朗讀課文；3. 課外多與同學用英語交流，提高聽力和口語能力；4. 每天堅持寫日記。本文時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class （上課認真聽講，做好筆記），go over your lessons（復習功課），vocabulary（詞匯），spend time doing sth.（花時間做某事），read texts aloud（朗讀課文），communicate with（與……交流），keep a diary（寫日記）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮點說明】

范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達方式，如狀語從句First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons regularly after class.；定語從句Last but not least, you should develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you review the words and expressions that you have learnt.全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外first of all，what’s more，last but not least等詞組的使用，使得文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉換自然，為文章增色添彩。