讀寫(xiě)任務(wù) (共1小題，滿分25分)

閱讀下面短文，然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

    If you got 100,000 dollars by chance，how would you spend it? Here are some answers of our readers：

Elizabeth Stahl：I would donate it to an arts program for young boys and girls．The decrease in the creative arts programs such as music，art and drama in the schools have left many young artists out in the cold in academics．Much like sports，art in any form can and does make a difference in young people’s lives．

    Marjorie C．：Although I agree with Elizabeth Stahl 100％，I’d give my money to each of my children to ensure the very best of education for my two granddaughters.

    Clark：With one hundred thousand dollars…1 would distribute it among those whom I know that are in need and ask that they in turn then share half of what they’ve received with others that they personally know are in need．

Carol Wilson：First, I would take care of all my debts and gain good credit again，and then I would spend the rest on a new car．After all is said and done，take a nice long vacation．

[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]

美國(guó)某網(wǎng)站的論壇就 “How Would You Spend 100,000 Dollars?” 為主題進(jìn)行調(diào)查。上文是一些網(wǎng)友的回復(fù)，你閱讀了上文后，準(zhǔn)備就該主題發(fā)表白己的觀點(diǎn)，

要點(diǎn)包括：

    1．以約30個(gè)詞概括上述網(wǎng)友的觀點(diǎn)；

    2．然后以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)，并包括以下要點(diǎn)：

       (A) 你想用這筆錢(qián)做的一件或幾件事情；

       (B) 說(shuō)明你這樣做的原因。

[寫(xiě)作要求]

    1．在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

    概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

People would spend 100,000 dollars in different ways if they got it by chance．Some would donate it to charity for various purposes while some others would take care of their own business with the money．

If I had the chance to get that money，1 would first set aside 20，000 dollars for my university education and then donate the rest to the children who suffered from the devastating earthquake last May．

    There is no doubt that a good education is of vital importance to a person．It is through education that knowledge and information are received and spread throughout the world．An uneducated person is shut off from the outside world because he is closed to all the knowledge he can gain through books．In contrast，an educated man lives in a room with all its windows open towards the outside world．

Thus I would use the money for my own education and help the children in the disaster area in Sichuan to gain theirs．


解析:

讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)的評(píng)分建議采用綜合法，即：根據(jù)總體影響給分。概要和文章的分值分別為5分和20分。

 

項(xiàng)目

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評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

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括

5　

按照要求概括了原文的全部主要信息，沒(méi)有增加與原文無(wú)關(guān)的信息，沒(méi)有照抄原文的句子。語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)正確，行文規(guī)范。

4

基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，沒(méi)有增加與原文無(wú)關(guān)的信息，沒(méi)有照抄原文的句子。語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)正確，行文規(guī)范。

3

基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相關(guān)的信息，有個(gè)別句子抄自原文。語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)基本正確，行文比較規(guī)范。

2

不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含較多不相關(guān)的信息，有較多的抄襲。語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)不夠準(zhǔn)確，行文不夠規(guī)范。

0-1

沒(méi)有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相關(guān)的信息，大多數(shù)句子都抄自原文。語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)不準(zhǔn)確，行文不規(guī)范。

寫(xiě)

作

18-20

包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題明確，內(nèi)容豐富。

詞匯豐富，用詞得當(dāng)。能有效運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，而且沒(méi)有（或極少）語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性好。

14-17

包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題明確，個(gè)別內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或者不相關(guān)。

詞匯較豐富，有個(gè)別用詞錯(cuò)誤。較好地運(yùn)用了合適的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，有少許的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性較好。

11-13

包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題比較明確，個(gè)別內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或者不相關(guān)。

詞匯較豐富，有個(gè)別用詞錯(cuò)誤。較好地運(yùn)用了合適的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，有少許的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性較好。

7-10

包含題目所給的部分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題基本明確，有些內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或者不相關(guān)。

詞匯有限，有較多的用詞錯(cuò)誤。語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)出現(xiàn)較多的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性一般。

4-6

只包含題目所給的個(gè)別內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。多數(shù)內(nèi)容不相關(guān)或者不準(zhǔn)確。文章有些地方照抄源文。

詞匯貧乏，有較多的用詞錯(cuò)誤。大多數(shù)的句子出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性差。

1-3

只包含與題目所給要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容有關(guān)的一些單詞。主題不明確，文章基本照抄原文。

詞匯極其貧乏，基本不能正確用詞。幾乎沒(méi)有正確的句子。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)零亂。

0

以下幾種情況，給0分：

1）完全抄襲原文（或其它文章）

2）文不對(duì)題

3）只寫(xiě)一些零散的單詞，完全沒(méi)有表達(dá)完整的內(nèi)容
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［寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容］

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1. 以約30個(gè)詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容；

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