Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

My hometown is a small village. Small as it is, but it’s very beautiful. There are a number of hill around my hometown and they are very beautiful. In spring, we fly kites are made by themselves on the top of the hills. The kites fly very highly. In summer, the trees and grass are green and the flowers are bright on the hills. Beside, the wild apples are nice to eating. In autumn, corns at the foot of the hills are ripe. In winter, when it snows, something is covered with snow. We play with snow and made snowmen. In my hometown there are blue sky, fresh air, sweet water and kind people. I love my hometown!

 

Answer 1

1.but it’s very ... 去掉but

2.a number of hill ... hill → hills

3.kites are made ... kites后加that / which或去掉are

4.by themselves ... themselves → ourselves

5.fly very highly. highly → high

6.Beside, the wild apples ... Beside → Besides

7.nice to eating. eating → eat

8.something is covered ... something → everything

9.and made snowmen… made → make

10.there are blue sky ... are → is

【解析】

試題分析：題目主要考查學(xué)生對(duì)狀語(yǔ)從句、名詞、定語(yǔ)從句、代詞、連詞、動(dòng)詞、時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等語(yǔ)法知識(shí)的掌握情況。

1.考查狀語(yǔ)從句。Small as it is引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，盡管它很小，本身含有轉(zhuǎn)折的含義。故去掉but。

2.考查名詞。a number of后面接可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把hill改為hills。

3.考查定語(yǔ)從句。這是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是kites，引導(dǎo)詞在從句中作主語(yǔ)，故kites后加that / which或去掉are。

4.考查反身代詞。主語(yǔ)是we，故把themselves改為ourselves。

5.考查形容詞。fly后面接飛得高時(shí)用形容詞，highly表示的是程度。故把highly改為high。

6.考查連詞。表示而且用besides，故把Beside改為Besides。

7.考查動(dòng)詞。to為不定式作后置定語(yǔ)，后面接動(dòng)詞原形。故把eating改為eat。

8.考查不定代詞。這里指每個(gè)事物都被雪覆蓋著。故把something改為everything。

9.時(shí)態(tài)。and前play用的現(xiàn)在時(shí)，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)保持一致。故把made改為make。

10.考查主謂一致。Sky,air,water,people都是不可數(shù)名詞，故把a(bǔ)re改為is。

考點(diǎn)：狀語(yǔ)從句、名詞、定語(yǔ)從句、代詞、連詞、動(dòng)詞、時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致